You've recieved PoopMail (his drawings).

[Poopmail]

Well, After going trough some trouble with my registration.
Here's my first post, with some drawings .

I hope you like my style.
Anyway, I've seen some nice drawings so far,
and here are some of mine:







The first 2 drawings are almost the same, just some details changed + the type of paper.
I just don't really know any poses to draw, since body proportions are like, hard to draw .

Well, thanks for reading my first topic.
+ Please comment them.
Critique them seriously please.
So that i can change my faults

Dislaimer: I can't color. If I do, it would be .. kinda.. bad.


-Greets

[Gero50]

They look alright, though I would not use graph paper very often. I think your style is good too. Keep up the hard work and good luck

[Mr. Panda]

Whoa, talk about the hair. o_O

Your style isn't bad, but please, don't use graph paper. It kills. T_T

How long have you been drawing?

[Daken.]

It's not bad. I like your last picture the most.
you got a pretty good style.

[Balance]

They're not bad, but the head really throws me off everytime.
You may want to change the proportion of the head compared to the rest of his body. Last time I checked, I don't think hair every became twice the size of the face.

Also the arms are a bit too small in comparison of the proportions of the body.

Just work on your proportions and I think you'd do fine.

[Poopmail]

Graph paper doesn't really bug me
But i know it isn't as nice as it is on white paper.

I know that the proportions are a lil' bit strange,
I'll try to fix that.

I've just been drawing at school when lessons are boring
I started like 3 months ago.

Thanks all for reply.

[Poopmail]

I tried to make the hair a little bit smaller =D
+ The triangles and that boll in his hand, just to make things more fun .
Here's a new drawing:

[THE ICE ANGEL]

This one looks much better (:
though I like all of them

[Poopmail]

x3.

[Poopmail]

I really tried my best at this one.
Hopefull you all like it :



Please say your opinion.

[Poopmail]

I'd rather have comments than low points. All the sucking drawings DO get comments. Does that means this one is worse than some first drawings from 9-year olds? I quess not. Maybe i'm blind for my own mistakes. Perhaps that's it. Anyway, if you give low points, add a reason beneath please.

[Taikyo]

hmm...not bad...

Your anatomy is a bit stiff...XD
Guys' hands are naturally big..well not that big, but a little more so than females.
Lines needs more work, they should variate from thin to thick lines, depending on where the light hits and such.

Thats all I can say...XD unless you want me to say more.
I dun wanna rate your drawings yet, until you improve. ^^

[Tira Misu]

Hi Poop, thanks for posting in the fanart forum, please take a look at the rules. You are allowed only one thread for all of your art. I'll merge this with your previous thread but please post any other updates in this thread to keep the forum less cluttered. Also make sure not to double post in your thread unless it is with new artwork. There's no bumping threads here.

Thank you!

[Poopmail]

- Taikyo: I never really tought about the lines before but I can see what you're talking about. And about the hands, I prefer small ones. .
The shoulders shoud be bigger and the left arm is to long , you probably also noticed that. I'll try to work on anatomy a bit more.

+ Thanks for the information, Tira Misu.

[Doctor One]

Your hands are too small, the human hand almost covers the whole face. Don't forget knuckles, that tiny detail makes your drawings look that much more professional.

[chuunin7]

Well, your drawings it getting better each post.. Keep that up.. XD and just for a suggestion, you can widen the shoulder a bit.. And the body length is usually 3 times head length.. Well, that's not a fix rule.. It depends on your style though.. I'll looking forward for the next art.. ^^

I like the last one more.. Cute~

[Poopmail]

Well, i like small hands and small shoulders
I quess that ain't realistic, but it looks better.

Well, here's another one i drew.


Don't forget to comment =D

[Poopmail]

Since nobody is commenting -.-
Here goes another one.

[Poopmail]

I'm so terrifying that nobody dares to comment^^?

[Poopmail]

Still no comment on my latest 2?
>.< Well than , eat this:

[chuunin7]

For the last drawing, don't you think the eye balls are in the wrong position?

[Poopmail]

Haha =p yeah, but it looks cute, doens't it?

[polaris 北極星]

you have the right idea, but the 3 things that grabbed my attention were:
1. the size of the hands
2. the forehead. the distance between the eyes and the top of the head should be about the same as the distance between the eyes and the chin
3. the eyes. imo the eyes are very important in giving the picture "life"

all in all, its a good start. practice makes perfect.

[iDensuke]

tis certainly a unique artstyle, but i kinda like it. of course the more you work, the better one will get so i am looking forward to seeing more

[Poopmail]

Well, a late night drawing.
Hope you'll like 'em.