I like the way the stars look 3D, this is a pretty good piece. However, the stroke and drop shadow on the girl make it stick out too much, try some blending instead.
The text really ruins this one. It doesn't match and it is way too big. Text shouldn't hide effects.
Nice effects, bad image. Try using high quality images, so you don't have to blur them. Once again the text doesn't match, and I can't really read it. Try non cursive text.
This is your best, it just needs some blending.