Hi! I recently got into sig making.
Here are my latest ones. I won't post my first two because those are just disgraceful.
Criticism appreciated!
(in order of which they were made:
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Hi! I recently got into sig making.
Here are my latest ones. I won't post my first two because those are just disgraceful.
Criticism appreciated!
(in order of which they were made:
Last edited by sa5m; 07-27-2009 at 09:12 PM.
LOL I love the Rock Lee One
Also I really like your signature style
keep up the good work X_X (btw are you taking requests?)
Sasuke Naruto Siggy Made by Me.
http://i286.photobucket.com/albums/l...les/sig3-1.jpg
Even though this one is basic, I am very fond of it. The color matches perfectly in my opinion =]
http://i286.photobucket.com/albums/l...dmire/sig4.jpg
This one is very shaky. I mean the color/text matches well but just viewing the whole thing as a whole is a tad on the weaker side.
http://i286.photobucket.com/albums/l...mples/sig6.jpg
This could be your best one to date, very nice.
http://i286.photobucket.com/albums/l...mples/sig7.jpg
I am very sorry but this one was most likely the worst of the set in my opinion. I can see where you got the color from but maybe a different font type would help it a tad?
http://i286.photobucket.com/albums/l...mples/sig8.jpg
Not bad, pretty good. I am wondering though why your arrow is pointing towards Rock Lee's hand. May your clarify that for me?
Nonon Jakuzure - Best Kill la Kill baePretty damn great! #spoke2soonOta "The Cutest Otaku" 2016 - Lol, how's your account doing lately? Oh wait.
I like the one that is your default Aaya. The text is a bit off centered where it says, "I'll bite you to death", but the different font's you used were creative and look nice all together. Also I enjoy the blend of the character in the background. This is a great start. Remember to keep adding a border to your signatures.
Yeah I think without the arrow is fine.
I like your work and can't wait to see (Also are you taking any requests)
Ciao, I'm not sure which text too use because truthfully I'm not really big on text styles but I do know changing the font up a bit would help. Sorry I couldn't be much of an assistance. Please forgive me my friend =[
Nonon Jakuzure - Best Kill la Kill baePretty damn great! #spoke2soonOta "The Cutest Otaku" 2016 - Lol, how's your account doing lately? Oh wait.
You can always look for tutorials here in AF, or maybe experimenting things will really affect your signature. Try blending the text with the background. You can also try changing the lighting, but before that what type of program do you use to make the signatures?
By the way, keep up the good work. I like to see more of your work and how much you can do.
Last edited by LittleMomo; 06-24-2009 at 04:35 PM.
Careful, I don't take you lightly.Sig set made by Daken_________________________________________________S. O. S. Finest Swordmaster
I'm going to take a very random stab in the dark and say that sig is from Romeo x Juliet? Now for some criticism. The color/text matches very well but it still feels very plain/bland to me. Maybe try to make it less plain, all I can think of up to now.
Nonon Jakuzure - Best Kill la Kill baePretty damn great! #spoke2soonOta "The Cutest Otaku" 2016 - Lol, how's your account doing lately? Oh wait.
It makes me want to pay attention more to the text than the other things around it. Try putting it somewhere so it is not the one standing out. x.x Anyways, you are improving so I know you can go higher.
Careful, I don't take you lightly.Sig set made by Daken_________________________________________________S. O. S. Finest Swordmaster
Thanks JFL. :]
EDIT: Set request by Raiken:
Last edited by sa5m; 06-30-2009 at 02:56 PM.
Thank you Ciao x]
I'll admit its not my favorite signature made but its not the worst and I actually do like it. The text doesn't fully match with the picture but you are getting better at sig making and I do hope to see more from you Ciao. Good luck x]!
Nonon Jakuzure - Best Kill la Kill baePretty damn great! #spoke2soonOta "The Cutest Otaku" 2016 - Lol, how's your account doing lately? Oh wait.
Thanks guys! I realize that my text needs improvement. And I guess I need to be more creative in general...
Here's one I made today... it's ugly and boring. SORRY. D: I made a spot for text but I couldn't think of anything cool to put there. So it's empty, haha.
Criticism MORE than welcome, as always.
Another one just finished:
Last edited by sa5m; 07-20-2009 at 04:19 PM.
Um. Where did my previous post go? O_o
Anywayz.. A set I made just now.
Which one? The regular or the gray?
Last edited by sa5m; 07-29-2009 at 09:34 PM.
The smudging is a bit too rigid in my opinion and the first version is much better than the second. The random gray spots really destroys the overall feel of the signature.
Two major problems with this signature, in my honest opinion, is the typography number one, and the lack of blending.
The typography is everywhere and it doesn't look as elegant as it seems that you wanted it to. I believe that a signature/tag should not have so many words in it unless its sole purpose is to be the tiny text to emphasize the typography. Sometimes some signatures look better without any text on it. Try not to spread the text around so much to make it seem as though it is filled up better if you know what I mean.
The blending, there is none. Refer to one of Serated's TOTW (Tip of the Week) concerning blending. That will explain a bit more in detail with examples about blending. You should also learn a bit of flow since it has to do with blending as well.
http://www.animeforum.com/attachment...7&d=1229137743
http://www.animeforum.com/attachment...5&d=1231114643
If you don't want to that's fine. That's just how I feel about your tags though. Keep it going though.
You're sigs are nicely done for a beginner. =3
there are some problems I want to point out though.
1. I'm not gonna repeat balance, but on the topic of typography, try using more than just black and white. Although black and white are easy to use, having a colored text can do much more than just plain black text. Black and white text actually do not work most of the time.
2. Try adding a light source or some lighting. But make sure it matches the render.This will somewhat help the signature look whole, but don't use it to subsitute blending.
The "random grey areas" look really doesn't suit the last sig.
I want to see more :3
Siggeh made by me. Taking requests ATM! =3
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