You're It, My Love . . .

[*Tsuki*]

I've written a lot in the past few days, but this one means a lot to me. It has a lot to do with what happened to me, so I'm not sure if it's that great. I tried to edit it, and cut out some parts, although I might have missed something that wouldn't make sense to anyone other than myself.
I like it better towards the ending . . . and, yea, there's a reason this is my 1,000 post. ^.^ Anyway, thanks for reading. *Tsuki*
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You're It, My Love . . .

"You're it, no tag backs."

You're it, the one I love,
don't pass it on, to anyone else,
my love's for you, and only you.

Let's play tag,
it's my favorite game,
the game that brought me to you.

It's only you I chase after,
in this game of tag.
You're the only one I care about,
the only one I want.

You wonder why, it's you I'm after,
can the other's tell why?
Why, when I'm it, I only want to tag you,
Can they see, how much I love you?

You've stolen my heart,
but I'll live without it,
I can't tell you,
and ruin this beautiful game . . .
our game.

It's a never ending battle,
trying to catch up to you,
but my feelings give me strength,
to keep running after you.

I'll keep up with you,
and even if you're far away,
you'll always be the one, in my heart.

Because, you're it, my love,
the only one who holds my heart.
Wait for me, someday I'll catch up again,
and tell you I love you . . .

[Cyrus.]

You write really good at writing poems and I really enjoyed reading this one. Keep up the good work

[Anime Forum]

Awww how sweet. I see why you saved this one for your 1000th post. I loved it and as I know you will, write some more when you have the chance Tsuki =]

[Aizen-sama]

i like it..it makes me smile and its so touching

[Sparda]

this poem is so deep and emotional,it just creates the feelings that everybody craves, good job

[Xieshunnuan]

I really like the ending =] It gave me chills but that's a good sign for emotions coming out from a peace of art.

[*Tsuki*]

^.^ *really happy* aww, thanks for answering everyone. ^_^

Let's see . . .

@Re'L: Thanks for reading my poems. =D I'm glad you liked this one so much.
@-Raiken-: ^.^ Yea, I love it. Means a lot to me. And, I'm going to post a few later . . .
@myojou: Yay! I like making people smile.
@Sparda: =D . . . I'm really happy I was able to do that. ^_____^
@Xieshuunan: I like the ending too. It's my favorite part, where I tried to put the most emotion in. =)

[ultra_maniac]

moon princess was expressing love and moon was blazing

[Kaname Shikara]

It's one of your sweetest poems Tsuki keep up the good work

[sogood01]

wow.. omg *Tsuki* i love this peom its very good well done. keep up the good work! ^_^

[Kirei Shijin]

I really enjoyed reading this one!

"It's a never ending battle,
trying to catch up to you,
but my feelings give me strength,
to keep running after you."
^This stanza is simply amazing!

I also really like the fact how you used the game of tag to portray the love you're feeling. It really is great. ^^

[Araragi]

..its beautiful, thanks tsuki... you made my day

[bee.]

this is adorable, lol
i like it, good job