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    Default Requiem of Pain

    The sadness of tomorrow-
    Do we feel today?
    Hiding forever while
    Everything fades to grey

    The requiem of pain
    A dark and lonely death
    A gasp, a sigh
    Wasting my last breath

    I will never shed
    A single tear
    I welcome Death
    There is no fear

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    nice poem..

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    Ita a nice poem, but again it seems so sad that you feel so alone and that you welcome death.

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    With all these sad poems, I am really starting to feel bad for you v..v.. Well anyways I didn't think it was your best poem to date but it was still better than average, nice job.
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    Though it was a short poem, I loved your expression of words. It felt like a sad poem, though in the end, it felt like the poet had some courage to face one's ulitmate fate. So, I liked the way it ended.

    Nice poem! Good job!
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