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    Door one is sadness
    Door two is pain
    Door three is Death
    The decor arcane

    I made my choice
    The door creaked ajar
    I stepped inside
    Curiousity from afar

    I can see his eyes
    Gleaming in the obscure night
    His grin shines and widens
    Grim skin stretched tight

    His limbs skeletal,
    He stepped towards me
    I tried to plea
    I cried and screamed

    He wouldn't be deterred
    He stepped nearer
    Briefly I could see
    Ourselves in the mirror

    Death stood behind me
    Ready to move
    I decided to surrender
    He didn't disapprove

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    That was a pretty good poem right there. I guess you shouldn't have chosen door 3 (never chose a door 3 of any kind). I like how in that short piece you made us visualize a dramatic scenario. And the ending really made it come together in a way, and it had the biggest emphasis or what you were trying to capture in the piece. Nice job.

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    Quote Originally Posted by SigmaSD View Post
    That was a pretty good poem right there. I guess you shouldn't have chosen door 3 (never chose a door 3 of any kind). I like how in that short piece you made us visualize a dramatic scenario. And the ending really made it come together in a way, and it had the biggest emphasis or what you were trying to capture in the piece. Nice job.

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