forever missed

**.Miki~** · 06-04-2009 03:57 AM

this poem, i made yesterday, almost 24 hours ago a good friend of mine passed away, and i've not been very cheery, enjoy, its my first poem i've posted for months.

Silent tears fall
As you slowly wilt away
Even though we know
You couldn't always stay

A friend to me you were
And forever will be
I'll miss you everyday
Your memory will never leave me

No one sees why
You had to be the one taken
Too good was your soul
Why’d they have to break it?

Through all the tough times
You always made it through
Everyone loved you so
And wished it wasn't you

Now I sit here and grieve
The loss of a great friend
Who slowly wilted away
And held out until the end

**Necro'lic Enigma** · 06-04-2009 06:29 AM

So sorry to hear that.
Your poem expresses the sorrow which you are going through.
i dont feel like judging it , at this moment.
All i can say is keep posting your work cuz i think you can write many great poems.

**Anime Forum** · 06-04-2009 12:31 PM

Awwwww, may your friend rest in peace =[ sorry for your loss.

I also agree though, your poem shows how much sorrow this loss has been and well only time can heal these invisible wounds. Nice poem though.

***Tsuki*** · 06-04-2009 02:09 PM

*chills run down spine*
Wow. Amazing. You really did do a great job.
*claps*
I applaud you on your ability to show the feelings so well.
great job, and sorry about your loss.

**Señor Nobody** · 06-04-2009 03:49 PM

Sorry to hear about your friend. You really got your point across and made me feel your pain.

**Daken.** · 06-04-2009 09:24 PM

Oh wow, very good and deep poem.
I love everything about it.
sad tho, but its still very good. Keep up the good work.

**ELR** · 06-04-2009 09:28 PM

Even though your friend is gone, that doesn't mean that he or she isn't still with you, check your heart, they live there. They may also continue to be in your mind. Just remember who they were and remember the good times.

As for the poem, it was sad, tear jerking. I hope to see more of what you have to write, my friend, for I have a feeling that you'll be writing more that will help others see more emotions inside of themselves.

**SigmaSD** · 06-04-2009 09:46 PM

Wow that was pretty amazing considering how little imagery you put into it. I have to say that I really liked the last stanza. It had some sorrowful feelings, but the flow was eloquent and soft. Nice job. Sorry for you loss though, but at least you still have those happy memories inside you.