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    Default just another poem(poem)

    there are no words that could even begin to express how I long for you
    I know things are rough now...and I pray to god that we'll both make it through

    you are my everything, the reason I live and the the reason I breath
    you are my sky, you are my air
    you are what lives in my heart, what keeps it beating
    without you I feel as I'm withering away

    I have no air, my lungs are burning
    I have no happiness, only sorrow brought by loneliness
    I miss the sweet smell of your wet dark blond hair after you get out of the shower
    I miss the way your soft, tender lips feels on mine
    I miss just holding you in my arms until you feel so comfortable that you want to fall asleep
    I miss your beautiful smile
    I miss your gorgeous light olive colored eyes that I could just stare into for eternity
    I miss you my lover
    I miss your touch
    I miss my sweet turtle dove
    I miss you my Joanna....

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    I have to say , thats a touching poem right there.
    Its sad , yet so lovely to read it.
    I can read this one for number of times without any doubt.

    Good job , keep posting your work.
    wish me luck for furture guys!!!!
    Thanks for everything!!!
    ^___^

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    Awww, reading that poem makes me a bit down. Its a truly sad poem but at the same time its also a nice one. You followed the flow and well you deserve some good credit for it, good job.

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    lol sorry it got yall down
    I wrote it after my ex told me that she wanted a break to think about things, so it's glum and dismal
    thank you for your posts ^^ and i'm glad you liked it

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