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    Default Haiku By Kumo

    Rain Song
    Water patters down
    Streaming to the ground below.
    Melody of rain.



    To the Moon:
    White smile in the sky,
    Light my way in the dark and
    Bring my dreams to life.

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    Basic way of what is around ones self, a creative way of putting those two things. I agree with your first haiku, if you listen to the rain it makes it seem that a small quiet song is playing or a loud roar of a masterpiece.
    The second haiku, I didn't think of it that way, the moon can be used more than just a sight to see, it is a way to light your path in the darkness. I loved it.
    I hope to see more lovely haiku's from you and hopefully more, my friend, keep writing.
    I am no more a rose than I am its thorns.
    No more a gentle breeze than I am the hailing storm.
    I am no more hated than I am loved.
    And I am no more heartfilled than I am heartless.
    This is who I am.
    ~ELR

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