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    Default Junkyard Angel

    There is a moonlit
    Junkyard dreamer
    She says smooth words
    Tastes like steam her
    Mind breaks open and
    Her soul starts singing
    With firefly kisses
    And mouth still ringing
    She moves like stone
    And she stands like water
    She grins like a mother
    But cries like a daughter
    And I

    I just stand there stun
    Lips like mortar
    Then I kneel and say
    “what’s your order
    Cause I

    I can’t take the light
    The light you are shining”
    And she says “go
    Go graveyard mining
    Tonight!”

    Out in the woods
    There a cooling shadow
    She has no lover but the
    Warming meadow
    And she ain’t talking
    She a no-words hipster
    While all four winds
    Reach their arms to kiss her
    And she just clothed
    In spider silk gossamer
    Hair out reached
    Like an orchid blossom her
    Smile! Why does it burn?
    Burn with zeal for nothing
    Her eyes just glowing
    With the spark of something
    And I!

    I cannot stay here
    I’m too poor in graces
    As he looks back
    With her million faces
    But I!

    Know she’s not in
    Not in a one of them
    Just like a flower
    Is not the stem
    So good bye
    So good bye!
    So good bye!

    In my home there’s
    No one waiting
    It’s just fine cause theres
    Pure gold plating
    And test tube fathers
    With Ikea mothers
    Who speak in riddles
    Written by some other
    So this is nothing
    The dream is fading
    So with a dust-grin
    I start to wading
    On through this life
    Life so fecund
    And yet so fallow
    So who am I?
    But some candle’s tallow
    Am I?

    Another person just
    Just another lifetime
    Just another ring
    In the windchime
    So soft and sweet
    But without soul
    And thing that is
    Precious for the whole
    Or am I

    A person who
    Saw a junkyard angel
    And her moonlit grin
    And her burning sigil
    Or am I…
    Last edited by Luzifer; 05-03-2009 at 07:33 PM.
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    What a gorgeous piece this was , the use of words and the atmoshpere that you created sended shivers in me.
    Beautiful.
    Keep posting your work.
    wish me luck for furture guys!!!!
    Thanks for everything!!!
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    The words you say put picture together but was so beautifully placed that you show the feeling as well. You have a few words spelled wrong, but other than that, I love it. Keep writing my friend, you are doing great and shall continue to do great, I can see it.
    I am no more a rose than I am its thorns.
    No more a gentle breeze than I am the hailing storm.
    I am no more hated than I am loved.
    And I am no more heartfilled than I am heartless.
    This is who I am.
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    As though it was a specter in the night or perhaps an echo of once living essence. I sense macabre resonance from our poem and yet it was so alive. I liked how you seemed to cut it short for each line, something fresh for these eyes.

    As always, your writing never ceases to bring something to this weary, and dreary mind. =D


    Perhaps the world was never meant to make perfect sense.


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