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    I watched the people , i watched the mirror
    and in the end its really hard to define
    which is real and which is me.
    I blame my father , i blame my brother
    but what was their fault its still hard to define
    i cant remember anything from my past

    And so while walking alone i crashed with a man
    Whos asked me to follow him somewhere
    But i cant even see hes face and still i thought hes a trust worthy man
    And why my ground is turning so cold again

    And when i arrived at my real home , i saw my mother standing all alone....
    Her tears fell like pearls , and my tears just burning with all her hurt...

    My mother , let me guide you to a garden
    Where there are roses which never fades away
    Can i sleep in your lap once more
    Where i find all the happiness of the world in a second

    My life was ended , by some people without a name in them
    But when i think about you i never thought that i was in pain.
    I saw my mother crying for me in vain.
    I catched your tears , still fell right through me
    My mother why are you crying , when i am so near?

    And so I asked myself to shut my eyes again
    I know this will end...
    And as my eyes close down my face feels cold again
    and my own voice calling your name

    And when i opened my eyes , i saw my mother's tears falling on my cheeks again...
    I was sleeping in your dream , but when i saw your face i was alive again...

    My mother , let me guide you to a garden
    Where there are children who left the earth to sleep with their mother again
    May i cry on your lap please?
    because i saw a cloth in your hand which was dripped with my blood stains...

    And my world ends with your face , who cried so much but still smiled for hes sons sake....
    Without you i am lost in this world , i want to see you standing on the heavens gate whenever i return...
    Last edited by Necro'lic Enigma; 06-08-2009 at 10:44 AM.
    wish me luck for furture guys!!!!
    Thanks for everything!!!
    ^___^

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    wow.. that was really touching..
    i almost cry just now..
    nice work! good job! ^^
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    That was a rather touching poem, I really enjoyed reading it and I was actually sad when it was over.

    Please keep it up.
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    Now that made me cry....one of the most touching and great poem i came acrossed....

    Awesome job sis , i never thought i would cry.

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    Two words:

    1. You
    2. Rule

    Silent, that poem had everything a good poem should. 5 stars, 10 outta 10 whatever, it was amazing!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Blood_Storm View Post
    Two words:

    1. You
    2. Rule

    Silent, that poem had everything a good poem should. 5 stars, 10 outta 10 whatever, it was amazing!
    Thank you so much for saying that.
    Was wondering if you will like it or not *_*

    It seems my efforts arent going in vain.
    Last edited by Necro'lic Enigma; 09-07-2009 at 08:54 AM.
    wish me luck for furture guys!!!!
    Thanks for everything!!!
    ^___^

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    Depressing, but in a good way. You got your point across and your wording is excellent. A+
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    OMG, this poem was really touching. *starts to cry* It's just so touching how you long for your mother's embrace and how even though she's sad while you're there, you still long to be with her.

    There were some mistakes in the poem. You used "hes" instead of "his" once, and there were other grammatical errors. But I liked the imagery and the flow. Nice job.
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    I Really love it.

    it was really touching , really nice.

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    Such an emotional poem, with such depth, it was captivating, i dont know how much work you put into this but it seems like alot and it payed off, it was a great read giving me the feelings a poem with this sought of meaning should and more.

    11/10
    A++
    just amazing
    Last edited by Sparda; 06-13-2009 at 06:38 PM.



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    amazing ...i ...its ....i dont even have words for it

    "Dark light come shine in her lost heart tonight
    And blind all fears that haunt her with your smile
    Dark light"-HIM

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    How da' heck did I miss this?
    *feels ashamed*

    Uhm . . . onto the poem!
    *nods* very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very amazing. *gasps for breath*
    Yes. That many verys are needed. ^^


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    WOW!! That was wonderful!! I could have felt it even more if only I were in a silent atmosphere. Unfortunately, I'm reading a magnificent and touching poem where people keep on making noises and where music cracks my eardrums.


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    Quote Originally Posted by *Tsuki* View Post
    How da' heck did I miss this?
    *feels ashamed*

    Uhm . . . onto the poem!
    *nods* very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very amazing. *gasps for breath*
    Yes. That many verys are needed. ^^
    Suki-chan is the best *sniffs*
    That was the cutest comment i ever read.^^
    Dont be ashamed , its dumb for me too that i didnt told you when i posted the first time O.o

    And thanks to you too akira, i appreciate that you at least looked at my poem. Thank you. ^^
    Last edited by Necro'lic Enigma; 09-07-2009 at 08:53 AM.
    wish me luck for furture guys!!!!
    Thanks for everything!!!
    ^___^

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    Really beautiful piece of work
    *claps*
    Its touching warming and caring. I hope I could get as good you one day.
    *feels inspired*

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