I dunno, I really do not like any of these tags.
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I dunno, I really do not like any of these tags.
1st: I think the background to the right needs to be sharpened more. I do like the yellow shinyness though. I just feel like it needs to be harder. This siggy feels very soft. It might be the size though.
2nd: Its like a picture or a car commercial. Like your driving through the dust. Very nice looking. The effects look really nice together and this siggy flows. I also like the color of the car.
3rd: My favorite of the three. the redness of the sig just looks tough and feels very much like the expression on his face. I think the text is too red though, sorta like glowy blood, but thats okay. Its a simple sig, I think you do those best.
I really like how sharp the color on the car on came out. The bg is also very simple, which is good, so you focus on the car itself. Simple can be hard to do, and you pulled it off nicely :3
Though, I wish there was text. It just feels a bit empty without it.
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I really like this one.
The right side of it looks really nice, nice brushes and all that.
Is it coffe she has there? Hehe, that was actually the first thing that caught my attention, it just looks nice XD
The colours are great.
The text fits, and the borders are nice.
Is it just me, or is the some leftovers from a brush on her face?
Like under the right eye, and on the chin?
I really need some comments. Tell me if you like these or hate these seeing as its been a while singe I really put in a lot of effort into making something out of myself.
Well well well.
Thank you for the lovely gift Serated.
I see that your styles changed a bit.
But that's okay.
Thanks for the gift Serated. : D
Tag 1 (Trey) Excellent lighting, depth, and comp.
Tag 2 - Comp seems a little off to me (too close to center) and the frames + scanlines just seem kind of messy.
Tag 3- Dislike colors personally, but very nice comp and depth.
Hope to see more tags soon ^_^
Last edited by Middy; 10-24-2008 at 01:26 PM.
Whoa. Trey's one looks positively smexy. Awesome colours (or, well, lack thereof) and compo. And thanks for the sig. ^_^
I really adore the first tag (opening post, blue girl) - took me a minute to figure out how you did that. Animations in banners can be very annoying very easily, but it's... graceful, for a lack of better term, or perhaps that's the perfect term.
If I have any problems with the entries of #7 and #11, it would primarily be that the desaturated / exclusion effects make it.. hm, not sharp enough. Dull. But they are very nice.
#15 is just lovely - sort of.. dreamy, I guess. Nice use of colors and appropriate softening/blurring.
Don't care for the Wolf too much, same critique on #7/#11. The text, however, is very professionally done.
#25: I probably would've reversed the fade off gradient behind the name, but that's likely a personal taste. It's somewhat monotone, but it's okay.
#29 1: is great. I don't usually like grey and reds but the effects and text all work pretty well. Not a lot of critique for this one.
#29 2: I like it! Text is a bit too blending, but I don't think stroke would've done well either. The fonts/vectors are nice, though, and the shapes of yellow and gold with the blue/violet of her eyes work together nicely.
#35 1&2: Exclusion/desaturate effect makes them dreamy, but bland. They need more color varience.
#35 3: Background is too sharp.
#35 4: Love this one. Lighting lines are just right and flowing, and the colors are perfectly varied. Did you use drop shadow on that black behind the text? It's the only thing that catches my eye I don't like - but I think a dark purple stroke over the text would work.
#35 5: I love this one. The blues and sepia are great. No complaint.
#35 6: Maybe a downwards gradient fade off for the block supporting the text. Otherwise, I like it, if not a bit monotone.
#47 1: Cute. :3
#47 2: Colors got a bit washed (blues mostly) but I like it. Especially the lines of greens. No critique~
#47 3: This pulls off the faded colors perfectly. I also greally like the semi-pixlated effect behind the text. No critique for this one.
#47 4: The lighting in the center of them somewhat washes them out, which doesn't work entirely well because the background is so plain. But they are blended into it well.
#48: Cute. x]
#51 1: Don't like the text, but that would be my only complaint on the whole thing. It's done well otherwise. Colors are especially lovely.
#51 2: Nice effects! Maybe would've lightened on the solid white a little bit around the car, but the rest is great, if not a bit incomplete.
#52 3: Desaturate complaint I've had earlier. Too monotone. Text is well done, though.
#55 1: Blending works well, the text works well.
#55 2: No critique for this one either, just would've gone without the drop shadow under the pixel text or included it around all of the text.
Ummm.. I read that you didn't mind constructive criticism.. so sorry if I offend and such. I really do like your signatures! They're very nice, and pretty unique. It's important to be varied, people who make the same style over and over again are just blah.
So, um.. yah. Good work!
i n e r t i a - - - c r e e p s.
Awesome, thanks for hte comments Atziluth. I really appreciate stuff like that, so feel free to post any more of your thoughts regardless of criticism.
Anyway, more stuff today. First off, SSD, someone who doesnt receive much for her efforts.
Next is a random signature of House. Now seeing as no one has come to claim it, its free for grabs and I will swap the 'Your Name' text for whatever.
These last two are unfinished and if someone wants to help me collaborate on these, I will upload the PSDs somewhere for you to work off of.
eeeeeeeeekkkkkk how could i miss your thread lol
Recent you posted lets see
1. Love love love sorry enough said lol
2. Also love it. Smudging is great clipping mask looks great if thats what you used lol.. Text could be smaller and i think would of looked better on the right hand side.
last two arent finished but still look good for unfinished sigs lol
Sig and avie made by Mira <3
As always, your works are really nice, some more than other's ofcourse.
Kareha signature, is really nice, nice usage of effects, colours, bla blabla. The one thing that I don't like about it, is the bottom right hand corner. I don't really see why it needed to become a dull dark colour there.
The car, really really nice, perspective is good and the colour just "pops", though it looks a bit too sharp on some edges.
The rest are looking lovely too, but I feel like I've seen that style too many times from you before, though it doesn't make it less nice.
Lastly, I have to say, the colours used make it look a bit more special and different.
Send over the 1st unfinished and I'll see what I can do. :3
As for your recents, I'd say mainly work on more vibrant colors. The SSD one seems a bit monotones, but it has good depth.
Large tags ftw.
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Lets be special today....
The first one is nice, but it could have something in the top left corner instead of darkness.
The textwork is pretty nice.
And as unli said, a bit too sharpened.
The second one is awesome, love the effects you have on it.
The first is amazing. Absolutely beautiful. The effects are eye-catching and the blending is extremely well done. The extract fits it perfectly. Please, please make a tutorial?
The second is just as good. The light is awesome and the flow is just perfect for it. Might I ask where you got the stock?
Hawt <3
Kos Mos just seems a bit over sharpened :3
Last edited by UrusaiSevera; 11-16-2008 at 04:03 PM.
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@Twila: By putting text in the lighting source, I risk breaking the lighting itself. I would rather not do that.
As for the rest of you, I have no seen anyone use those Clannad extractions, so let me show you what I can make with one of them:
Please make a good example out yourselves and use them before I stop doing them. (this message is directed towards certain IGFX individuals. You know who you are.)
Unli's right. The whole image is too soft. And the background is very obviously the extract's dress.
And don't worry about no one using the Clannad extracts because I sure will.
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