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    Default Can't take the truth

    Can't take the truth

    Here I sit in my own insanity
    I saw it but pretended I was blind
    My own prophecy
    When it came true I lost my mind

    Now I can't remember my name
    Now I can't remember my face
    Now I can't see what I became
    Now I can't find my pace

    I lost it all
    I lost you
    It's all the fault of that wall
    It's around your heart breaking it down is all I do

    Yet I fail
    You pierced trough my heart
    With a nail
    And I grabbed the wrong card

    I have lost this game
    This game of love and saddness
    And now I can't remember my name
    it could have been happiness

    Honey if you can see me now don't look away
    Look this is me trowing myself away
    And my heart and blood turned grey
    And here I am doing my last pray

    I wonder if I get any answer
    I know you will send me some sms but I don't care
    Without you I'm just a worthless dancer
    Dancing in despair

    All because of those words...

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    It's awesome..but I don't quite get the main idea. A person that's in depression?
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    A great poem that reminds me of my life.


    Your color is Black. You value power, ambition, and darkness. You love power at any cost, and are a corrupting influence on those around you. At your best, you are resourceful and unashamed. At your worst, you are parasitic and amoral. Your symbol is a skull. Your enemies are white and green

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    The poem reminds me of some guy who didn't treat his girl right and she left him and now he's all sad and fat and crying and stupid.

    But, it's a good poem. Lots of cool phrases.
    On this day of days, most epic and prideful, you were born 15 whole American years ago!
    Through the odds and by doing the impossible, you beat out hundreds of thousands of siblings in the great sperm race for the coveted egg.
    Probably via hax.
    Regardless! You won!
    So remember, whenever someone picks on you or calls you weak or small.
    Just remind them that you beat out a few hundred thousand other wimps.

    And the grand prize was not dying!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Memento Mori View Post
    The poem reminds me of some guy who didn't treat his girl right and she left him and now he's all sad and fat and crying and stupid.

    But, it's a good poem. Lots of cool phrases.
    Hahaha! that comment almost made me choke on my iced tea .. lol.

    As for the poem, I really like it -- it reminds me of one of my experiences. It's very moving also.

    This is my favorite part:

    Honey if you can see me now don't look away
    Look this is me trowing myself away
    And my heart and blood turned grey
    And here I am doing my last pray


    great work, hope to see more.
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    great poems and you really put lots of emotion into it write more soon

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    I like the poem the them was deep and it seemed to true

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    I like it. It showed all the pain of being left behind by a lover that was the girl's world.


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