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    Default Enternity's Lack of Time

    Here's another poem for you guys.
    Note: This poem has a combination of love and emotions mixed together.
    So feel free to comment and share your opinions. ^^

    Enternity's Lack of Time
    Thomas G.

    If I spent eternity with you,
    it wouldn't be long enough.
    I wouldn't have the time to do
    all the things that I would love.
    I could never share the notion
    with all the words in every tongue
    of the extent of my devotion.
    There's not enough breath in both lungs.
    There's not enough beats in my heart
    to live our life as I would choose.
    All I can do right now is start
    and just hope I'll make it through
    even half the things I want to say
    about our love, about our life
    of how it never fades away.
    Even though you'll be my wife,
    and we'll not part for just a second,
    there's too few seconds in a day
    to live the life my love has beckoned.
    I'm sure, in love, I'll find a way.
    I'm sure, in you, I'll find a girl
    with whom I'll live eternally.
    With all the gold in all the world
    and beauty found internally,
    I couldn't ever begin to show
    the love who's passion you don't know.
    Eternity's not enough time
    for me to be yours and you to be mine.
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    I like it I wish I could write something like that to. But I'm stuck on the sad ones hahahaa. =p But I really like this it shows how much you can love someone. You show the power love can give.

    Hmm since I take it is based on your emotions you have a girl. I hope you and her can be together for a lifetime and beyond if theres a beyond.

    Aah well it's a nice poem and I like it. I can't really explain why. But well you've done good on this one. =)

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    Quietly, but surely...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Howling Star View Post
    I like it I wish I could write something like that to. But I'm stuck on the sad ones hahahaa. =p But I really like this it shows how much you can love someone. You show the power love can give.

    Hmm since I take it is based on your emotions you have a girl. I hope you and her can be together for a lifetime and beyond if theres a beyond.

    Aah well it's a nice poem and I like it. I can't really explain why. But well you've done good on this one. =)
    Thanks Howling. I actually am in a current relationship with a girl at the moment. We had our anniversary three days ago. Heh. But I appreciate the comments you give. Your poetry is great as well, And I'll take your advice to work.

    PS. I'm sure you'll fight the sad "phase" of poetry. Promise. I've went through that myself.
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    Yeah I will fight that time. Though I've been in it ever since I first started poetry. =p Maybe for 2 years I guess.

    Well congratulations with your anniversary. I'm happy for you.
    And thanks man. You keep on writing =) You inspire me to get a bit happier in my poems. =p

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    ^_^ yea, very nice poem. I, too, like how it's happier. And, I, too, am stuck on the sad poems. Well, not exactly stuck, but they're easier to write. It's fun to make it sad, then happy at the end though. =) anyways, good poem. =D


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    Interesting poem, you did a good job on it.

    Usually I am better at writing happier poems than at writing sadder poems, but that just proves how everyone is different =D
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    ok it caught my interest... not a bad job on this

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    Wow. It was really good. But i think it would be better if they will be grouped in stanzas. Still doesn't change the fact that it is amazing.


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