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    walking down the street i feel that i'm missing something, but what could it be?
    as i continue to walk tears start to fall from my face, why am i crying thinking to myself.
    i stop for a second and realize that i'm crying because i'm lonely without my fiancee'.
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    Hmm...i dont know why but i dont feel like judging your poems because i feel i should not. Dont get me wrong , they are nice and pretty though they are short but with deep meanings , but its more like your writing for someone so i dont want to judge it. They are with pain , written all over it.

    I wil pray for you though i dont know anything about you but i feel your in some kind of pain , i'll pray for your happiness.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Silent Madness View Post
    Hmm...i dont know why but i dont feel like judging your poems because i feel i should not. Dont get me wrong , they are nice and pretty though they are short but with deep meanings , but its more like your writing for someone so i dont want to judge it. They are with pain , written all over it.

    I wil pray for you though i dont know anything about you but i feel your in some kind of pain , i'll pray for your happiness.
    I wish i am wrong but thats all i can say sister.
    I agree it has a deeper meaning that can't be judged.



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    Quote Originally Posted by sailormoon21 View Post
    walking down the street i feel that i'm missing something, but what could it be?
    as i continue to walk tears start to fall from my face, why am i crying thinking to myself.
    i stop for a second and realize that i'm crying because i'm lonely without my fiancee'.
    I really don't like it and I am sorry If I'm being blunt but I am sure you would want the truth. Each line is too long and this poem could of been better with more thought.

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    this poem seems emotional, and like silent madness said it has deep meanings, its irie i like it.
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    It was only the last line I truely saw. While I read it, as soon as I finished a line, it escaped my memory and floated away into the sea of words forgotten. I can honestly say I forgot what you said in the poem, and it didn't really stick out to me. I just . . . Don't think it's as good as you could do.


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    I agree. The last sentence was the most to pop out. But I think you should read this outloud to see the errors. But it's good.
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    Well you should be happy now that you got exactly who and what you wanted the entire time... Bye forever! I will never caused you pain again, I'll leave it to other guys, But know that i did love you and cared about you, as for now and that I know exactly who you really are underneath I feel sorry for you, but its your life so live it well... So long friend!!!!
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    Quote Originally Posted by sailormoon21 View Post
    walking down the street i feel that i'm missing something, but what could it be?
    as i continue to walk tears start to fall from my face, why am i crying thinking to myself.
    i stop for a second and realize that i'm crying because i'm lonely without my fiancee'.
    I feel lonely without you too.. I can't stand to be away from you for more then an hour, it hurts me when your not around and I can't stand the pain. My love and feelings for you are so real and deeply and truly real, and that will and won't ever change!!! Love you sweetie!
    In this world everything changes except good deeds and bad deeds; these follow you as the shadow follows the body.

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    sweet picture ladies and gentlemen lol write me? bye from:em0k1d k0

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    short poem nicely done and very direct to the point

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