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    Default Code Geass Fanfiction: Just a Dream

    I got the idea for incorparating song lyrics from another fanfic on another site about 2 years ago on another site I cant remember, but it was still a wonderful fic and I wish I could find it again. This story is original, and the lyrics are Carrie Underwood - Just a Dream. I thought they fit the mood. It is KallenxLelouch and it is SAD. Warning contains spoilers till the END OF CODE GEASS SO DON'T READ IF YOU HAVEN'T WATCHED IT YET I DON'T WANNA RUIN IT FOR YA!!^^



    "It was two weeks after the day she turned 18."

    Kallen pulled on the dress she never wanted to wear. The black silk fell down around her legs. Her black silk gloves covered to bruise marks on her knuckes for punching the wall out of anger...or greif...she just didn't know anymore.

    "All dressed in white...going to the church that night."

    He promised he would save her, he promised victory, but she never thought that he would...

    "She had his box of letters in the passenger seat. Six pence in her shoe. Something borrowed, something blue."

    The ride over was long, even though it was only a few blocks away. She felt every bump as she drove down the street, the burning stare of every Brittanian that stared at her, the Black Knight Girl. She reached the church.

    "When the church doors opened up wide she put her vail down, trying to hide the tears. She just couldn't beleive it."

    She through the huge oak front doors and saw everyone turn to look at her. Rival, Milly, even Nunnally's head turned in her direction. She let her bergundy hair fall into her eyes, red from crying into her pillow.

    "She heard the trumpets from the military band and the flowers fell out of her hand."

    She walked ever so slowlt towards the casket. Blinded by tears, she whisked them away. She heard Amazing Grace's gentle melody, but she felt miles away. She couldn't make out words, she saw only the casket. She held the blood red rose close to her heart. Reaching her hand out, she stroked the rosewood before she looked in. Her eyes met his pale face. The rose fell...

    "Baby why'd you leave me, why'd you have to go? I was counting on forever, now I'll never know. I can't even breathe."

    His warm lips met hers for the very first time. She was taken back to the best day of her life. He was gentle and kind under the cold extiror. Zero had dissapeared for a spilt seccond and it was Lelouch. He was now a part of her, in her heart forever.

    "It's like I'm looking from a distance, standing in the background. Everyone's saying, 'He's not coming home now.'"

    She fell to her knees, hand still on the casket. She remembered that day...

    She looked on in horror and a man clad in Zero's guise plunged a sword through Lelouch's heart. She screamed, but she didn't hear it. She felt the sword go through her own heart, shattering it, it would surely never heal. Her vision went blurry as she watched him collapse into a pool of his own blood. Everything was silent. The only thing she could hear was Nunnally's sobbing, and it cut through her heart like knives. She couldn't speak, she couldn't breathe, she couldn't think, he was gone. She was alone. The emptiness in her soul would cripple her forever. They had both lost so much, an now...each other.

    "This can't be happening to me... This is just a dream."

    "It's just a dream.." she whispered weakly, staring at the Rose on the floor, just as she had when she fell to the ground on that day, "It's just a dream...it's just a dream...it's just a dream..."

    ----------------------------------------------------
    R.I.P. Long live Lelouch vi Brittania
    "And this, the most unkindest cut of all..." - William Shakespeare, Julias Caesar

    Please tell me what you think, but remmber I have a fragile heart. If you hate it, please be gentle^^.


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    *Looks up at jewelry dood*

    Yeah....right.

    Anyway....

    I'm not a huge fan of songfics in general, they have a tendency to piss me of since I (usually) despise whatever song the author decided to use. In this, I'm indifferent. It's done well, it just isn't something I tend to enjoy.

    I'm seeing a few obvious spelling/grammar errors, which are easily fixed via spell check (so go use that, NOW!).

    My only real complaint is on spacing, oddly enough; there are many lines that could have used their own 'paragraph' instead of being bunched in with other sentences. Because of this, they fail to see their full potential in terms of dramatic and emotional use.

    Ex.

    Quote Originally Posted by Original
    She looked on in horror and a man clad in Zero's guise plunged a sword through Lelouch's heart. She screamed, but she didn't hear it. She felt the sword go through her own heart, shattering it, it would surely never heal. Her vision went blurry as she watched him collapse into a pool of his own blood. Everything was silent. The only thing she could hear was Nunnally's sobbing, and it cut through her heart like knives. She couldn't speak, she couldn't breathe, she couldn't think, he was gone. She was alone. The emptiness in her soul would cripple her forever. They had both lost so much, an now...each other.
    Quote Originally Posted by How I would've Done It

    She looked on in horror as a man clad in Zero's guise plunged a sword through Lelouch's heart.

    She screamed, but she didn't hear it.

    She felt the sword go through her own heart, shattering it, it would surely never heal.

    Her vision went blurry as she watched him collapse into a pool of his own blood.

    Everything was silent. The only thing she could hear was Nunnally's sobbing, and it cut through her heart like knives.

    She couldn't speak, she couldn't breathe, she couldn't think, he was gone.

    She was alone.

    The emptiness in her soul would cripple her forever. They had both lost so much, an now...each other.
    Granted, I also wouldn't have worded that paragraph like you did, but I'm not the author (or am I ).
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    lol OR ARE YOU^^

    But Yeah. I grouped them together to make a smoother and more noticeable transition from Song to Fic. But Oh Well^^!! Glad somebody Liked it!!

    PS: Jewelry dude ticking my off, keeps botherin' my threads >.<


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    Quote Originally Posted by Zahnhauser View Post
    *Looks up at jewelry dood*

    Yeah....right.

    Anyway....

    I'm not a huge fan of songfics in general, they have a tendency to piss me of since I (usually) despise whatever song the author decided to use. In this, I'm indifferent. It's done well, it just isn't something I tend to enjoy.

    I'm seeing a few obvious spelling/grammar errors, which are easily fixed via spell check (so go use that, NOW!).

    My only real complaint is on spacing, oddly enough; there are many lines that could have used their own 'paragraph' instead of being bunched in with other sentences. Because of this, they fail to see their full potential in terms of dramatic and emotional use.

    Ex.





    Granted, I also wouldn't have worded that paragraph like you did, but I'm not the author (or am I ).
    lol but true i would have worded it other wise..^^

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