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    this is one of the first poems I have written that actually have a mildly optimistic view..well at the end, but you get the point. It worked relatively well I suppose.

    Redemption

    Brilliant din, the habitual stamp, quelling fear.
    Vibrant hue, false innocence it cries.
    Rosy countence, outlines the corridor
    Shady masque of crimson regret
    Golden Joy glides about,
    The very air shudders in her presence.
    Azure beauty, picking her way through the audience.
    Captured attention, hints a shade of emerald.
    Ashen fissures, tear the stitches.
    Lovely spectrum, now grim vision
    Desperate war, the palette wage.
    Truth, cruel as her custom, emerge the victor.
    Tarnished decay, it's roots sank deep, rears itself a throne.
    Reaper's court, jubilant beasts.
    Pestilent in their reveire.
    The Watchers weep
    Their hopeless cries, a dirge for the souls.
    Foolish, their guard, Careless, their rule.
    A magnificent stallion, ivory master.
    With a flick of wrist, decimation greets the sullied horde.
    The victor is met with delight.
    Purity now reigns, sovereign magnus.
    No longer facade
    No longer unjust
    Lucidity descends upon all.
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    This is a really good poem. When I read it, I was having some medieval background running through my mind and I seen oppression but yet wealth through it all. It seemed a lot like a story was being told in a way. ^^



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