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    Note: ||This might be a little... Over the top. But it just came from my fingers like all my poetry. Comments, thoughts, all appreciated even in such a mood. ||

    Is faith really all we need,
    To stay forever alive?
    Can't we sow more then we reap,
    For our sins to be undone?

    Dust to dust-
    Ashes to ashes,
    My time will be short
    This pendulum that smashes
    Will cave in my soul,
    Disemboweling the hidden truth
    That once made me whole

    If love is the only truth
    So pure as the well of eternity-
    Then why is it a lie,
    When it breaks your youth-
    filled vigorous heart inside?

    Tomorrow is another day
    Yet soon it dies as well,
    No matter how hard you try
    Your humanity is geared towards hell

    Hypocrisy is docked
    In the harbor of our souls,
    Sheathed in carnal sin
    We feel it makes us whole

    And even though it takes us
    Higher then the mountains we climb,
    We fall right back into ourselves
    When we realize it lacks 'that' shine

    The shine which makes it sacred
    Or perhaps unholy truth,
    Lost in lust until we bust
    And drown in the well of youth

    And when our frames shall fall
    Only time can truly tell,
    Whether God is real or not
    In the end we all shall return to hell.
    Last edited by Tetsanosuke; 01-09-2009 at 09:16 PM.


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    I really liked it ;D
    The flow was amazing and I see ur very talented at this. I liked the whole poem, good job.

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    I could totally picture you performing this poem in front of people. So much imagery and emotions are in this piece, and it's very moving. It has a depressing tone to it, and each image you create adds some power to the poem. This is a nice piece of work.
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    Wow, that's really deep. It was really interesting to read and I really like it. ^^ great job i hope you write more


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