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    Default Need Commentes Please



    btw, the pic I used have cloud already green-y, so yeah..it sucks...would work better if cloud is in normal color








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    Jio Freed V2 is my favorite.

    The Mario one is shmexy, though. :3
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    Well...do you have any advice on how I can improve on my sigs, and what are my strength and weaknesses?

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    Your extract for the Mario sig is really bad (though I have no advice for you because I suck at those too). You can really tell because he extends beyond the rest of the sig. You might be able to mask that with a blur and a bit of light erasing if it wasn't outside, but as it stands I can't help.

    I think the Cloud sig lacks focus. Cloud should be the focal point, but he gets lost in the bg. Try making him stand out more by making the bg a contrasting color or giving him maybe like...a glow? Iunno.

    I think both Alien ones are very good though.

    The Jios are fun! I likve V1 more because it has an extra swirly thing on the left, which me likey. =D


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    Thanks for the advice...though a friend rendered Mario for me.
    For Cloud I did try to make him the focal point, but because of his original color I really can't do much...



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    Your Cloud sig could use some more work. The smudges don't really help on focusing the viewer's attention and the text... simply does not fit at all. Perhaps a different font and design would look nicer. There's also a lot of negative space on the right side. Try finding a better image of Cloud to fit the style you've used in making the background.

    The sprite one is pretty good though there's no flow. The lighting and background are good so this time, work on blending the sprite into it so it doesn't look completely out of place.

    The Mario... is of bad quality that's for sure. If you're using an extract of low quality, I highly suggest not using it in a transparency-style sig. Those are usually reserved for high quality cuts.

    The aliens(?) are much better, particularly the first one. Like the sprite sig, just work on blending it in so it doesn't look like it was pasted onto the background even if the color themes may be similar.

    Jio Freed is not bad but the cut seems to either be of very low, pixelated quality or simply way oversharpened. The lighting is okay but could use a little more work. The text is fine with me although you could use a different font and style, then place it a bit closer to the image and not so close to the edge.

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    I see....thanks for the advice~

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    Comments please.

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    this i like
    mario and FF 1 is good 2
    rest seems too.. fuzzy and edgy?
    nice background tho

    lol you are just like me in a way
    good with bad ground but have blending problems xD
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    Sure but my blending is better than yours though.

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    Quote Originally Posted by iSmile View Post
    Sure but my blending is better than yours though.
    lol yeah it is..
    I don't work on blending at all xD

    prefer to have my render stay out... its... preference xD
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    Well I don't like render to sitck out...I will blend them be it using smudging or adjustment layers. I also don't like C4Ds sticking out like a sore thumb. I prefer using C4Ds only for flow and effect.

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    same
    C4D sticking out in background really pisses me off lol
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    Also sometimes the problem is not the lack of blending, but blending too much.

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