Looking For You

[*Tsuki*]

Okay! Another poem by Tsuki! This one's really short compared to the others, but I still felt like putting it on . . . so, here it is!

When I looked for you in the light I couldn‘t find you.
When I look to the dark, I’m scared.
But, I’ll go that way, whatever it takes, to find you.
Just like a dog that’s lost it’s way, I’ll find you and return to you.
No matter how long and dark the path may be.

[Kalila Chan]

Such a nice short lil poem. Good work there.

[*Tsuki*]

heh actually, it's probably the worst i've written. . . it has no flow, and the words are kinda jumbled around. I was really tired when I wrote this. I should go back and change it, but I'm too busy and it's too short a poem to really care about . . .

[Anime Forum]

Well its decent. It is not the best I have seen but it is good. Short but nice. I rate it.. 6/10 - decent work. Keep it up.

[SigmaSD]

I thought it was okay. Not much imagery. It's pretty good for a short poem.

[*Tsuki*]

you guys are way too nice. i would rate it 2/10 maybe. . . It's really lame, but thank you for your opinions. ^^

[ELR]

I poem doesnt always have to be long or make pictures to let you see what it means. Even the shortest poem could have a stronger trigger to a being than one long poem that makes you fall a sleep. Keep writing friend, and never worry about how long or short a poem is, just write what you feel.

[Sanosuke X]

Could use more detail...but I like it.