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    Default Poem*

    Another of my teasers i hope you like..

    To loveless nights
    and frightful dreams
    do i surrender at ech touch of my pillow

    to dull days
    and thoughtless lies
    do i regain conciousness and time.

    Be still my heart
    you beat too loud
    yearning for much too much

    lie calm my voice
    speak not your claims
    forever soundless remain

    for on the day
    when your heart sings
    your voice will spill forth in chorus

    your world will change
    your night no longer remain
    in the patterns of the days strains...

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    All I can say is wow. I really like this one, and I dare say it's one of my favorites. I think it's because the symbolism really speaks to me. Nice flow, structure, and word choice.
    If Minecraft had a Japanese intro.

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature...&v=H5qFZjuKet4

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    ah! that was amazing. I wish I had a better word, but I'm utterly speachless, and I can't say anything. . .


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    It was a good poem but not perfect. Sorry if I sound mean and yea it was good, but it is very hard to make me speechless. I mean hard, and that poem failed to accomplish it, but very good poem. Be proud.

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    I personally think you did a good job writing this poem, and its pretty good

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    Looks, like I haven't caught up into my poems lol Well you have eloquent words in which I cannot develop in my poems, that's for sure xD Well I like it and hope to see more.
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    Thanks for the comments I appreciate it

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    Beautiful, the flow is great.
    The meaning really jumped out at me.
    You kept it simple, and meaningful, I love it.


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