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    Default Never again will I put my heart on the line

    I wrote this in April of 2005. This was how I felt at the time.

    Never again will I put my heart on the line
    For you pulled it out and were so unkind
    I feel like a fool for trusting it with you
    Sorrow has overtaken it
    Pain is too much at times
    I feel as if love is the biggest joke
    Like I am falling and about to choke

    Never again will I put my heart on the line
    Being so naive and so blind
    I now know the real you
    I know you never cared
    Love is just a waste of my time
    I feel like I am now so empty inside
    I just want to curl up in the corner and hide

    Never again will I put my heart on the line
    I just hope someday soon I will be fine
    I shall move on but it just takes so much of my time
    Getting over you will be a good thing for sure
    But for now my heart is so sore
    I feel like a shell of what I once was
    But now I will try to forget what you caused

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    "I like the poem because it rhymes"

    Are you people freaking kidding me? How hard it is to actually READ a poem and comprehend it?

    Oh it said "blah blah blah" I liked that part in the poem for x reason. I also liked the poem because it was depressing, and those are my favorite poems.

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    hey, i know what you mean about puting your heart on the line. your not the only one. i been through it and it was painful. but hey, i am still not over him. but i am not giving up.


    Never give up love.

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    nice poem.

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    Well that poem is depressing. I liked it's structure. The flow was a little shaky and didn't flow smoothly. But I really enjoyed the imagery. I hope you're finally over him.
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    It was interestin.it had flow issues at certain points but its good.

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