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    Her Name


    The light in the bedroom
    flickers like a nightmare
    sweating in the strobe of it
    she wonders if there's anyone
    who remembers her name
    Everything inside shudders
    sickly
    As winter lazy lady bugs
    spiral midair
    The light swings on shifty wires
    Bending the shadows
    Like waking shadow-people
    And for the dizzying moment
    She doesn't even remember
    Her own name
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    Where all of your dreams hide when you abandon them for wakefulness.

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    I really like the imagery in this one. Very nice. The only confusing line I found was "As winter lazy lady bugs". I didn't get this line. But it was an effective poem. I could feel the confusion of the person the poem is based on.
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    If the lady bugs here survive into the winter they get sluggish and lazy, doing nothing more than flying around light bulbs (spiraling midair). They are winter lazy. ^^
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    Quote Originally Posted by sarcastinated View Post
    If the lady bugs here survive into the winter they get sluggish and lazy, doing nothing more than flying around light bulbs (spiraling midair). They are winter lazy. ^^
    lol. Thanks for explaining it to me. I feel like an idiot. Now it makes more sense.
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    Certainly! And you're not an idiot. I prefer you know what I was going for rather than have it make no sense.
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