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    I wrote these when my computer wasn't working. Hope you enjoy. I enjoyed writing them. Gave me something to do. Thanks to Rein for the boost of confidence and inspiration to write.



    The Little Garden


    In the little garden,
    where the rose bush grows,
    lies the greatest of treasures,
    that a little girl sows.

    Many have sought after,
    that mysterious treasure-trove,
    growing peacefully in that garden,
    on a tiny hidden cove.

    So one day in the garden,
    on that tiny hidden cove,
    men went a-pillaging
    for the mystery of the trove.

    Rampaging through the garden
    leaving destruction in their wake,
    the men went on searching,
    for curiosity sake.

    But what they found,
    brought silence all around,
    for buried in the ground,
    wasn’t a scepter or a crown,

    but a tiny tiny light,
    that opened their sight,
    to things they couldn’t see,
    of how they’d pillaged with glee,

    all through the little garden,
    that the little girl sowed.
    They’d unearthed her soul,
    Oh how beautifully it glowed.



    Suleza Azulana J. W…..
    The fool sees the bend but doesn't look beyond it.


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    Wow. I thought it was really amazing. I really like the introductory paragraph. This poem left good feeling inside me, especially the ending. I'm speechless.

    If Minecraft had a Japanese intro.


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    Fantastic! Don't stop now, just keep on producing these poems. Please..?
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    this is magnificent. Its well written, great choice of words, very angelic and innocent. I liked it very much.

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    Awwww. thank you guys. just when i was going to give up. Something told me to search this one out and see if anyone responded. i got a warm fuzzy feeling when i was writing it too. ok i'm going to check on the others and post a few i was working on. Thank you very much.
    The fool sees the bend but doesn't look beyond it.


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