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nice poem wonderful
Thanks for all the comments =) I really appreciate it ^^ Well, here I go again with some so called 'poem'. Well, whatever...enjoy <3
Swept away by you
I only met you the other day
I only glanced at you
Still I saw it all
Your face
Your hair
I only heard your voice from far away
But...why can't I take my eyes off of you now?
Why can't I forget?
Even when I go to bed
I still remember every strand of your hair
I remember every word you've said
I remember even the colour of your bag
Say...What did you do to me?
Every day I go to this one place
I look for you even though I know that it's useless
I look for you even though I know that I'll only feel pain
I run and run
I don't even know where to look for you
I only know that I have to find you
But I don't know what to say
What to say when I find you
Will you smile?
Will you recognize me?
Will you know what I've always had in my mind?
Will you know by just looking at me?
Please...find me
Find me because I can't find you
And then...do what I couldn't do
Tell me these three words
Strike the chords
That will turn into a melody
A melody that will make my heart ache
Let me feel the pain
The happiness
The love
Please...love me
And only me
Forever and ever
Till time stops moving
Because I got swept away...
By your scent
Your voice
I got swept away by you
And I love you
Only you...
Dedicated to my sweetheart. I love you, Aurelius <3
Last edited by Iceflower; 03-25-2009 at 09:57 AM.
Aww. That's so adorable, sweetie. Made my heart melt.
Love you too, sweetheart. :}
I could write a book about your mind.
You could never write a word about my life.
The song "Father" really touched me. I just love it.
And the latest poem is just too amazing. You are very talented and I honestly can't wait to read more of your poems. I am actually not interested in poetry, but I really like your stuff ö.ö ~
Last edited by .fnhvmnvmv; 03-27-2009 at 07:08 AM.
Well, your so called "poem" was really quite good. I see that you dedicated this song to someone so obviously you visualized that person in your mind and you out-poured your feelings or vice-versa! Anyway, the poem does not have the bodily appearance of an actual poem, but it is really quite good. Nice job!
Sorry, but I got to read only one of your poems. There are too many poems over here.
Last edited by CrystalAce; 03-26-2009 at 11:04 AM.
"To do is to be" - Descartes, "To be is to do" - Voltaire, "Do be do be do" - Sinatra.
NOTHING OUT OF THE ORDINARY
Really like the 'poems' they are cute and i enjoy them...
Thanks for all the comments ^_^
@ Neige: Thank you for these lines. I am glad that you enjoyed it <3
@ Celeste: *hugs* Love ya and thanks for leaving some words in my thread =)
@ lone_Sannin: *bows* Really appreciate the opinion you left me here ^^
@ Magical Soul: Thanks for reading.
Well, my poems don't always have a structure or a good flow. Some of them have others don't.
Because I think of them as a way to express feelings, the life. And these things don't have a clear structure.
Life strikes you sometimes, it makes you smile. Feelings come and go. And thoughts will never be restricted by 'stanzas'. ^_^
I don't know if my 'poems' are really what you expect from poetry, but I know that they tell the truth.
And truth is everything what people want even if it might hurt from time to time. =)
Dreams
I always wanted to reach for the stars
I watched them passing by
Mornings turning to nights
Till the sun arose again
I knew what would happen to me
I knew what would happen...again
Every time it was the same
Stepped upon
Kicked
And they think of it as a game
They think of me as a toy
Because I act all coy
They want to crush me
They want to destroy me
But all they harm is my body
All they reach is my skin
My bones
But never will they grasp my soul
My hope
My ego
My heart
And my dreams
They make fun of me
They laugh about me
I am unnecessary
I am unwanted
That's what you want me to say
That's what you want me to think
You want me to hate myself
To hate life
And erase my own existence
But I won't be your puppet
I won't do what you want me to do
I will fly
I will spread my wings
And leave you all behind
Once and for all
I'll get you out of my mind
I'll forget them
I'll forget you
I'll forget what you did to me
I'll reach for the stars
For my dreams
And a new life
Without you
I love Dreams and i love this poem too keep up the good work...
@all: I want to thank everyone here again for all these comments. I can't believe that anyone actually reads these 'poems' xD''
Here is one again. It is...well, kind of sad? ^^'' But the end is for you to decide. Read it if you aren't afraid of harsh words and come up with your own solution =) Ah, yeah: Don't worry. I am not feeling depressed or anything. =D
Last Resort
Cutting, hurting, destroying
Again and again
Cutting the skin
Crying in vain
Nothing's ok
Everything's fallen apart
I am torn
I am already torn
Can't you see it?
Lying in the bath
Lying to others
I do it again and again
Never ending
I can't live anymore
Not without doing it
Not without doing this
I cover my wounds
I cover my soul
I cover everything
Pain
Nothing but pain
Again and again
I'll cover everything
Till nothing's left
This is my last resort
My last resort in this torn life
My last resort left in this world
I can't exist without it anymore
It's my only chance...
Leave me alone
Leave my side
There's nothing left anymore
Nothing but pain
You'll be hurt
You'll hate me
So just leave
Leave me alone
Some think of me as an angel
Some think of me as a saint
Some think I am happy
Don't they realize it?
Don't they see what I do?
Don't they see all these cuts?
Can't they see my suffering?
But...do they even want to?
I am already alone
I was left
I am forgotten
I am nothing but a puppet
I am nothing but an empty shell
I am already dead
And you don't see it...
It was my last resort
It was my last resort in this life
My last resort left in this world
I couldn't exist without it anymore
It was my only chance...
I thought
But is it really like this?
oh my, that really is, sad. I think that the title fit it perfectly, and I quite enjoyed it. Good Job! ^.^
Oh, and I just couldn't resist reading "Dreams". I really liked it, and I see that you have a certain style you use. But back to the poem . . . I really really really liked it. Whild I was reading it, I could feel the determination of the speaker. It's very good, great job!
Last edited by *Tsuki*; 04-07-2009 at 03:55 PM.
@Tsuki: Thanks for the comment ^^ I appreciate it.
Again was absent for quite some time. I am soooooo sorry >_< So here are some little poems. Hope you still enjoy them ^^
The clock's chime
One thread, two threads, three threads
Spin, spin, spin around
One, two, three
Time goes by
Four, five, six
People start to move
Seven, eight, nine
The threads begin to ensnarl
Ten, eleven, twelve
Time's over
Ready or not
It's coming...
Hatred
You were a friend
I loved you once
I hated you twice
I was disappointed thrice
So I decided to throw you away
Into the deepest depths of my heart
But still, I look at the ceiling
Thinking about you
Your body
Your high voice
The long brown hair
I cut that night
I still remember your crying face
Your stupid tears
You betrayed me once
Twice
And even thrice
I know that I hate you
I hate you from the bottom of my heart
I want to kill these feelings
And still...I can't let go
I have to destroy you
Once and for all
'Cause hatred is stronger than love
And it yearns for compensation
Again and again...
Someday - Sometime
Someday we'll put down the guns
Someday the anger will vanish
Someday we won't long for blood anymore
Someday we'll realize what we've done
And eventually we'll start changing
Sometime the tears will dry
Sometime the sorrow will stop
Sometime we'll be able to laugh together
Sometime we'll be able to accept each other
And finally we'll be able to turn the world upside down
Everything we've been longing for
All that we've dreamt of
All that we've wished for
Everything is possible
When we are together
When we realize that all we have to do is believe
Believe in us
Believe in others
Believe in the possibility
That we can change this tainted world once again
Because after all
We all long for it
We all want it
We all wish for it
All of us...just want peace
I like the second and third one...I think love is stronger than Hate but the poem wud certainly try to tell me otherwise..i felt ur frustration ....the third was convincing but a lot more mellow than the second..it was good stuff^_^
I haven't done here anything for years, I think! So, well, sorry and here are two new poems. I haven't been that much into writing, I have to admit, but I tried to. Maybe you like them, maybe not. Anyways, I hope that it isn't that hard to read it.
@Rein: Thank you very much for your comment. I really appreciate it.
Illusion/Disillusion
Someone like a shadow
Someone like the light
I watched you day after day
Night after night
You walked away day after day
Night after night
The perfection in you
The perfection in me
We were the same
And still we were not
Something in you lived
That had already died in me
Someday you called out my name
I called out yours
And as we tried to touch
Everything fell apart
You were just an illusion
And I was desillusioned
You were not real
You never were
.Dream
Unreal, impossible
Yet so wonderful and luring
Vanishing when I touch it
Like a water mirror
Silently responding
Denying my touch
Disappearing when I call for it
Diminishing, disappearing
Made up of human wishes and hope
Made up of all we cling to
All the things we cling to in our darkest times
Hope, wishes, love, sadness
This is what it lives on
This is what we feed it
In the middle of the night it draws nearer
In the middle of the night it hides in our heads
Shows us what we desire
Shows us what we fear
And disappears once again with our awakening
Like a shadow it hides
It resides in our soul
Our "self"
Only waiting to show its face again
To show us its dreadful face
The dreadful face of a poor puppet
Our puppet
It is a sad, lonely puppet called "dream"
The one everyone possesses
But noone cares about
I love all of your poems! O.O They draw the reader in and make them interested right away. You have a great sense of imagery in your poems. I hope you continue to post more of them. ^^
Amazing set by Ezza Obsuna ^^
The days fly by and the feelings remain
So far away and causing us pain
That's okay we'll make it through
Soon we'll get to say "I love you" ♥
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