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    I wrote this today. IT is currently untitled but I hpe you like it. Please be free to be honest.




    A silent gaze perpetuated by time and stage
    A comforting note written on a neatly crushed page
    These things remind me of your grace
    These things instill in me a mere resemblance of your face
    Now so far removed
    I sit in trance trying to set a mood
    One which lights the air and sing in my ear your song of praise
    High above any other your existence is raised and dreams of you splatter back on my face
    To ignite in me a fight to be free from this shell that stifles me
    And so I run to you
    You who shows me a world of truth
    A sea of patience with the waves of delight
    A somber moment in the lingering twilight
    I look forward to the day when I might, at last lie with you under star light.

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    Who is that joker that posted above me. What a jerk.

    I really liked the poem Rein*. The only thing I would suggest would be to separate it into different stanzas. No need to change anything else, though. 'Cause it's fantastic.

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