Original Fiction: Bloodcurdling Letters: Chapter 1

[Anime_Shuffler]

Chapter One = Finally, Home Sweet Home.

A small child jumped out of the car and screamed" YAY!", Cindy opened the silver painted car door and said" Home sweet home, At last". Cindy ran upstairs and said.
" Be careful with the stairs Milly"
Milly nodded her ran into a room.

Cindy went down a white hallway andopened the door at the end. The room was fairly big with it's own bathroom, Cindy smiled and said to herself.
" My room"
Cindy got her pad of yellow sticky notes and wrote on the stick pad.
" Cindy's Room"
She stuck the sticky note lighty on the door.

Cindy ran outside and asked her Dad.
" Dad, Who will look after us when you're working?"
Her father, Kyle looked deeply into Cindy's eyes and said.
" Trust me that you will look after Milly while I'm gone?"
Cindy jumped and she said.
" I-I'm to young!" Her Father said" No your not, You are 13. You're big enough to look after yourself and Milly".
Cindy looked down while the autumn leaves swept with the breeze, Gently touching her feet. She looked up to her Dad.
" Ok, I will Dad. I promise"
Cindy stepped forward and hugged her Dad tightly.

Cindy went upstairs with her boxes and placed them on the floor in her new and improved room. She opened and boxes and looked at her sapphire ring on her finger, The ring that her Mother gave her before she left. Cindy whispered to herself.
" Hope you're happy Mum, Wish you were here...".
She continued to open the boxes and place her things everywhere, All she had to wait for was her bed and her computer.

[+Namiko+]

It's good, but it's a little short and it doesn't really get into the story enough. Other than that, I really like you characters! This looks like it's gonna be a good one! Keep going!

[Anime_Shuffler]

I'm going to start a new story. I've stopped on this story. I'm actually writing a new one anyway.