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    Oh dear sister I’m sorry that I
    Never was there for you
    Deep in the dying room
    Oh god what did those hands do!
    So pretty you were before
    But now black rivers run
    All around you’re eyes
    But you’re hair flows to none
    Of the same shores it had
    Those precious cities made
    Of emerald and marble
    Of sapphire and jade!

    Its fine if your misery
    Speaks with your other voice
    I know that what happened
    Was supposed to be by choice
    And I can’t feel you breath
    Or you’re inner heart
    Beating and skipping and
    Giving out without a start
    You just hang silent and
    All painted grey not gold
    Like my precious sweet
    Sister sweet sister of old

    But I can’t call to you
    What happens when lungs
    Are filled with darkest tar
    And salt is across my tongue
    Oh sweet sister sister of mine
    You can’t be damage though
    You are now in you’re sadness
    And in you’re very lowest low!
    But we are here by you
    And though we can’t touch you
    Nor can we come to you
    know my sad eyes are true

    And now you are swollen
    With some crying thing
    Deep inside of you and I
    Hear his cries in silence ring
    And you’re unspeaking calls
    Me from my room while
    You sleep I watch you
    You’re stomach and pile
    Dreams with your dreams
    And pains within your pains
    And I want to find salvation
    And hope this will not be a stain

    Oh but you milk is wonderful
    You are crying and so fine
    As you clutch from you fluids
    That precious gift of a sad time
    What sorrow you had been given
    What beautiful thing now sighs
    And you’re tears are glistening
    Not grey they are rainbow-dyed
    Oh sister sweet sister of mine
    You who will ring out for all time
    I wish I was an imitation
    Of your strength and your shine!
    Last edited by Luzifer; 09-07-2008 at 10:46 PM.
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    nice i like it kinda brooding nice jorb
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    Even though it a bit long for my normal poetry taste, I liked it.

    It short of hit close to home with me, so that make me taken an extra interest in the poem, I also enjoyed the rhyme scheme. This is my far my favorite my poem thus far on AF congratulation this truly an amazing poem.

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