ummmm my drawing!

[TheQueenOfAllYaoi]

uh this is my second thread and all And YES these are my drawings...... um I'm hoping That you guys look at them and yeah. please loooook at them! *does a little dance*

[rikumi]

lol First to comment! (=w=)~o Your art is no where near bad, but work on the linings and shadings as well - it may help a lot. @the 4th drawing: the body of the character seems to be out of shape...Nice art though, good try ^w^

[sataned]

WOOOO!kIRBY!!! goodjob!! ;D and nice profile shots for them other ones, pretty goods

[bluewolfjelly]

I could never draw as well as you.
They are soo awsome
Yay Kirby!
♥

[~Zetromis~]

Quite nice, and rather impressive...^^

[october breath]

I love Gara sexy collar bone =]
Don't you just hate how pencil drawings come out when you scan them.
It's not as smooth as the piece of original paper.

[╬Karami Mew~Meow]

Kewlio! They're pretty kool ^^ Kirby~! x3 lol

[Leeps]

Wow Wow, I like 'em a lot. Very good =)

[TheQueenOfAllYaoi]

AWWW thanks!*jumps for joy* I'll try harder I Promise! I will not fail you guys!

[Doctor One]

That kirby looks familiar. Sonic hat?
Lulz.
Looks good but something about gaara's hair feels off. Dunno what.

[Diocletian]

Very good.Is that Pikachu or Sonic?

[HeartlessViper]

AH!
Very good!
Your facial features (the way they are drawn) are beautiful!
Hair(which your strokes are very verg good but rarely tend to curve back in),Lips, eyebrows, eyes , and the shading of your noses.
Those really attracted my attention! And the fact there are no location of any design lines.. Which could be just a really good eraser. Or the areas that are darken drawn is a sign of tracing, not accusing you of such)

However, you need to learn more of porportions of the body. One of the easiest ways to practice for that is draw yourself in the mirror, preferablly nude (not being perverted) so that you can understand the porportion of the body. Oviously the male ond female are diffrent. I'd post a picture drawn of myself nude but I don't think that would be appropriate on this site even if for learning purposes. Also learn how the muscles move.

What I used to do is drawn the picture, get up look in the mirror, rest, come back and look at the picture and ask myself "does that look human?"

Other than that, you have great potential!! Keep it up!!

Excuse my criticism, I'm not trying to be rude, but know that criticism is a artist best ally.

[Raesama]

I have to say, you have gotten a lot better xD *jealous* lolz

[TheQueenOfAllYaoi]

hhheeehehehe thanks for the crtisim! really apprecatie it! it's really helpful and I'll use it.well here are my two recent ones. I tried real hard! there not that good but I added my own style to the naruto one. Idk. hope you guys like it thought.

[HeartlessViper]

AH!
Great! I really like the Naruto drawing! He does'nt look as kiddish with the longer/slimer face, he looks like hes in his teens.
Your Toon Link is perfect except you have the shadowing angle a little off. Not very noticable to untrained eyes.
Other than that, great work!
I appluade you!

[TheQueenOfAllYaoi]

hey thanks! I'll pratice my shading!

[DemonsRevenge]

Kirby one so CUTE , do you plan on coloring it?

Good work

[Raesama]

OMEGAH! Use your own style, it's awesome~

[Happi Giraffe!]

wah! nice work! i like the kirby one especially ^^

[TheQueenOfAllYaoi]

uuummm yeah here are my drawing I drew recently. I drew one in pen of a girl in my french class( she didn't know of course) but yeah. I sorry if you can't see them very good but it's my scanner. O______. so yeah. what do you think?

[la_lazy_ninja_princess]

wow!!! i like them! their awesome!! keep going!!

[Animegirl and sexy eyes]

i seriously love the gaara pic! he looks very cute and kirby looks like a chibi. ur drawings are cute i love them all

[Tira Misu]

Please read the rules, you are allowed only ONE thread for ALL of your fanart. This is to keep the forum from becoming cluttered. Please post all your fanart here and refrain from starting more threads. Thanks.