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    Default Rae-chan's Art~nya

    I drew this one along time ago: http://snobunny-chan.deviantart.com/...Style-40867870 but I like it alot.

    I did this one more recently: http://snobunny-chan.deviantart.com/...armer-93146890 , and it's the best CG i've yet to do. (I know, it's still bad.)

    And I did this one a few days ago. It's not anime, but a rough sketch of my grandmother: http://snobunny-chan.deviantart.com/...-Soon-94520823

    Critique, please?

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    lol >w< First to comment! I'd say that your first drawing is a simple one, that would definitely be better with shadings...The 2nd one lacks the touch of color...It has a rlbg but the character's proportions were not quite accurate. The 3rd one is out of my field, so I won't comment much about it....O_O I'd suggest that you work on the linings though. =^w^= Well, ganbaru yo.


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    more like only to comment xD

    i took your advice and i am working on some other stuff that ill post soon.

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    http://snobunny-chan.deviantart.com/...ump-1-94943360

    read the description there...

    my wrist really hurts, even in the splint :[

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    Wink My Art~nya =update=

    http://i139.photobucket.com/albums/q...g?t=1219711862

    I drew that a few days ago and cged it in photoshop elements 3.0.

    c+c, plz @w@
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    okay, try not to make 2 thread, alright? just post in your original thread ^_^

    the pic is okay, my advice is to make the hand smaller and add fingernails...? (?) and outline it with black if possible.
    I really like the pic, keep it up~~

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    8/28/08

    Shinku-Rozen Maiden (drawn 8/22, colored @ LaGuardia orientation 8/27)

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    The drawings are okay, there's still lots of improvement to be made e.g the proportioning and the shadings. Personally, I think the colors should be more contrast so that they can stand out. d(=w=)~o
    P.S. Kajiwara-nii should really see Shinku-chan =^w^=


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    Rikumi: thanks for the advice ^^ but the shading for shinku (lolz) looked a ot better before i scanned it because my scanner has an abnormally bright light that washes stuff out

    Here are some random doodles from yesterday on iScribble...



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    Nice fanarts! I suggest shading and coloring in one direction or at least one direction per shade/color. Unless of course you're aiming for a certain effect. ^^ I think scanners wash out colors in general >_> So I'd suggest tweaking around with the adjustments of your scanner software or the scanned pics themselves in a gfx editing software like PS to bring out the lineart and/or colors more. To avoid those dark shadows, try covering your scanner with a dark colored cloth while scanning. That way light won't enter the scanner and that you'll have a better scan. ^^

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    Okay, here's the deal.

    I am a freshman in art school and all of my still lifes suck so much so I need real critique. Here is a picture I did this morning of a water bottle in my room. (Yes, the shadow it casted actually looked like that @w@) ANYWAY, I am well aware of what is wrong with it. I need your help to tell me how to FIX it because I am terrible at the sort of thing


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    Please I Need The Critique~

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    i really like your fan art......but i think you can do better^^
    i agree with rikumi, the hading needs improvement^^ but don't worry you're doing fine^^

    i especially love the water bottle drawing....that's really nice^^
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    Hi there, just a friendly notice that you need to post all of you art in one thread, namely this thread. I merged it with your other thread so please post all of your updates in THIS thread.

    Thanks! And keep up the good work.
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    Done sometime last week:

    Rena Ryugu - Higurashi

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