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    Default Untitled, By Viewtiful

    I look out through the windows,
    Gazing upon the flow of the river. Slow. Peaceful.
    I sit, watching. Waiting
    No expression showing.
    No purpose.
    Unwanted by everyone.
    My hollow eyes mask the hurt inside.
    No one knows me at all.


    I lay on the field.
    Watching the clouds. Floating. Changing.
    I remain still. Lifeless.
    Regret fill my head.
    Regret for my choices.
    Decisions that left me here, broken. Alone.
    The impatience, the harsh words.
    No turning back.


    I saw my world fade to black.
    An outline appeared infront of me. Beautiful. Glowing.
    I am nothing to her.
    She doesn't even notice me.
    She walks past.
    I try to shout out.
    "Save me...
    Don't leave me here alone..."



    This is untitled, mainly because I couldn't find a name to suit it, no special reason really.
    This is basically a sorta poem of my thoughts at the moment. I hope you like! I'd like to hear any comments you have (Even if they are bad )

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    this sounds just lovely.keep up the nice writing.

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    that was AWSOME!!!! please keep writing that was a really good poem!
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    Way to go! Keep it up. (:



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    Simple and beautiful. 'nuff said. ^^
    Thine soul is mine for the keeping
    As a thousand rivers now dividing
    Provides me with that much needed killing!

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    Weep as much as you want, and feel the hands of despair groping for your soul, for nothing can ease the pain of losing your beloved, like the gentle thrust of my sword.

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