GeTtInG oVeR yOu

[.Ileaz.]

Yeah i liked you, but it doesnt matter
any more
i thought my heart was broken, that my heart had
torn
but i was exaggerating and was in over my
head
i got over it because i'll find some one else
instead
i cried for you, but my tears are all dried
up
i use to write how much i love you and for
what?
all my love for you seemed to have dissolved
away
i wont go back to you, no matter what you
say
you probably think im alright and gettin stronger
too.
yeah, you're so right because im gettin over
you!




heh heh theres plenty where that came from!!
wat do you think of it?

[seraphic_demon]

I think it's nice, sweet even (in a sense), although the form was kind of confusing it does get the reader's attention to read the whole poem. All in all...Here's a rep!

[.Ileaz.]

thank you^^

[Jinkazuma]

Nice story its sweet

[Kazuma-One Reality]

Good job. Where was did you get the idea for it?

[Memento Mori]

Though I'm not a big fan of poetry, and a lot of the poetry here I have no taste for, I really enjoyed reading this one, because it had rhythm and rhyme.

Great work, I expect more.

[kajikun16]

nice and sad one i know the feeling of being heartbroken