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    Default Takahashi Hitomi - Aozora no namida

    I was listening to Aozora no namida sung by Takahashi Hitomi when I noticed some differences between the lyrics here and the song. Here is the whole song with the corrections that I could work out.

    Hitori kiri kurayami no naka kimi no namida no imi wo shitta
    Negau basho fumidashita kedo dare mo kizutsuketaku nakute
    Umi wo wataru kaze wa kyo wo mo mayowazu ni ashita ni mukau no ni
    Kokoro wa doushite ugoki dasenai
    Donna unmei ga matte irun darou
    Kuyamitakunai yo umareta koto
    Kanashimi no naka ni yuuki ga aru
    Kagayaki tsukamu to shinjiteiru
    Furishikiru aozora no namida
    Itsu no hi ka egao wo ni kaeru yo
    Isogiashi oikaketa kaze yubi no aida wo surinuketeku
    Shinjiru koto mada kowai kedo todomaru koto wa mou shinai
    Tsuki ga sotto kata wo tataki minamo utsushite kureta kiro michi
    Mayou koto sae wasurete yuku yo
    Nani mo nai asu ga matte ite mo
    Nanika wo umidasu te ga aru kara
    Kimerareta michi mo kaete yukeru
    Tsuyoi omoi ima komiageteru
    Koboreteta aozora no NAMIDA
    Ashita ni wa kitto hareru kara
    Miageta saki e to arukidaseru hazu
    Doko made mo yukeru jibun nakusanai nara
    Donna unmei ga matte irun darou
    Kuyamitakunai yo umareta koto
    Kanashimi no naka ni yuuki ga aru
    Kagayaki tsukamu to shinjiteiru
    Furishikiru aozora no namida
    Itsu no hi ka egao wo ni kaeru yo
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    The only thing I'm seeing here is that you've changed instances of 'o' to 'wo' which is entirely based on the personal transliteration preferences of the person doing the song, and that you turned 'kyou' into 'kyo wo' (which I'm pretty sure isn't right).

    Also, namida being capitalized is fine, since the word is written in katakana in the booklet.

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    Actually the one on the site now is really a bad translit, I've really tried to find someone else who could replace it since I don't have the kanji (lame excuse)...

    But anyway you're not Lv1 and least to say you didn't read the sticky so I can't approve it...

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    Since AzureDark mentioned s/he didn't have the kanji lyrics, I've decided to post it in the kanji lyrics section.

    Anyways, I've looked over the translit as well and it looks fine to me. The only correction that I can find would be "kiro michi" to "kiiromichi" (Tsuki ga sotto kata o tataki minamo utsushite kureta kiro michi/月がそっと肩を叩き 水面映してくれた月道(きいろみち))

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    If anything I'd probably suggest a fix of the translation, there seems to be two lines missing... and I'm not exactly sure why the title is being translated as 'Tears of Heaven' when aozora would be 'blue sky' (unless there's something I'm missing here?)...

    It's times like this where I wish I was capable of translating personally.

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    I waited for so long for the translator to reply to my PM and email because they missed one line, but it never came, so I just put the blanks there.

    And I assumed since Neoqstar submitted the translit, it was another one of the bad ones by that blacklisted user...

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    That's understandable... though I think in their case, it was a possible matter of, some of their bad transliterations were earlier ones and they got better over time (I know I've been there personally).

    Hmm... as for the translator, I noticed they've only translated three songs, so it doesn't seem like it's someone who is probably frequenting the site, so I don't think they are ever personally going to fix it.

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    AzureDark: what do you mean "by that black listed user"? I haven't been in this forum that long so I don't know what you meant.


    Anyways, I've attempted the translation on my own. But there are some parts that I'm not too satisfied with (especially lines marked with *) so I hope someone can edit it or give tips. Thanks


    Alone in the darkness, I found out the meaning of your tears
    I stepped out toward the place I wished for, but I don't want to hurt anyone

    Today, the wind that crosses the ocean will blow straight toward tomorrow again
    But why can't my heart start moving?

    I wonder that fate awaits me
    I don't want to regret having been born
    There is courage within sadness
    I believe that I can find the light
    Tears of blue sky, still falling
    Someday it will change into a smile

    *The wind that I chase after at a fast pace slips through between my fingers
    I'm still afraid to trust, but I will no longer linger

    *The moon softly taps my shoulder, the water's surface shows the path of the moon
    It makes me forget that I was confused

    Even if there is nothing waiting for me tomorrow
    I still have hands that can make something
    I can even change the fated path
    Now I build up my strong feelings
    Tears of blue sky, overflowing
    The sky will be clear tomorrow

    *I should be able to step toward the path I've looked up to
    I can go anywhere, as long as I don't lose myself

    I wonder that fate awaits me
    I don't want to regret having been born
    There is courage within sadness
    I believe that I can find the light
    Tears of blue sky, still falling
    Someday it will change into a smile

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