There is a some residual nipple showing through the shirt, so I marked it PG-13. Though I did try to cover this as well as I could w/o screwing up the look of the shirt.
Ok, onto the point of my post.
>>>> Reason for rejection. <<<<
-Text is too dark, faded image is really distracting and the scan should have hard edges (and be less bright purple) like the rest of the wallpaper.
-Get rid of the border
Ok, so the 1st image is the original. The 2nd is what I did to it after it was rejected. Since the mod said the text was too dark, I simply put it's opacity back up. I did agree the border looked abit off, so I did indeed remove it. The border was supposed to tie the top and bottom bands together, but yea, lol. I also changed her color to try to match the background. Removed the faded image. I never liked it anyways. I had been too lazy to make the screen for the faded images shirt, so not only was it distracting, but it didnt match the forground version. I also think I softened some of the grain on her, and gave her a smoother looking skin than before.
So please, tell me what you think of the tweaked 2nd one.