This is my first fanfiction and for my first I knew I wanted to do a Ranma fanfic since it's the easiest and I wanted to do a crossover making it even more easy. So I looked for a crossover that has never been done before (Not anything that shows up on Google search anyway.) and behold; the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles. I posted it on Fanfiction.net where so far it's been pretty well-received, but every time I try to advertise it on a forum people don't give it a chance. They say they're way too different to ever work (Which I don't see what's so different about them besides one being a Japanese cartoon about fighting and the other being an American cartoon about fighting. I mean, if you look at it, it's not that ridiculous of a concept. Hell I've seen Ranma/Akira crossovers and somehow that's more logical than this?), anyway, I digress.
So since this is my first fanfic I've been looking for people to read it and review it, I hunger for any sort of criticism, negative or positive. Being a huge fan of both shows I personally think that I have brilliantly (or at least as brilliant as fanfiction can get) spliced the two's stories to make they work in harmony with each other. I didn't do any changes to either of the stories (besides a few character detail hiccups on the ninja turtles side), I made sure to check all my Ranma sources so that there's no alternate universe crap (I stress this since it's an anime forum and I can only suppose you'll want that part to be the most accurate), of course if you wanna be a tight ***; I'm sure I made a few mistakes with some elements of the Ranma universe but I can't spot them.
So without further ado (I have 7 out of 10 chapters completed, but the site that this link leads to only has the prologue, chapter 1, and chapter 2. I'll post more granted I get some readers. And in chapter 2, for some reason, there's these little "Â" symbols at the end of each sentence, I don't know why they're there, they weren't in the original text and I can't fix them, so just try and ignore them.);
http://www.mediaminer.org/fanfic/view_st.php/153971
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