If This Were A Poem...

[Demon Hunter Dante]

If this were a poem...
Im sure it would tell...
A story of love...
Or a cry out from hell...

If this were a poem...
Im sure it would say...
A secret is stirring...
That will never go away...

If this were a poem...
Following some sorta rhyme...
A message would be hidden...
Spoken line after line...

But since this ain't a poem...
Just a thought from my mind...
Take one lesson from this...
And dont waste your time...

[Capernicus]

Wow...this poem is so well written that I actually tried to google search the title to check if you ripped it off. Much praise be to you! It is truly my kind of poem. Not deep at all, it basically pokes fun at all poems for being needlessly abstract. Love it. Though, I would like to make one suggestion concerning it. The first line of the last stanza...I think it would follow the structure better if the word "since" were taken out. But then...the last stanza misses out a bit as far as content goes, but I think it would be worth it.

[chocovanilagal]

Dante!!!!!real nice work!
ahhhh the poem is really cool.
frankly speaking...what i felt was that it keeps the reader in a thought..making the reader analyse the poem clearly..making every line clear in the mind...its really neat!