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    Default In Order To Kill You

    Wrote this one about a serial killer who only killed when he was in a split personality. It is a bit graphic, just a warning.

    In Order To Kill You


    I see you there, looking at me
    You're everything I want to be
    I just have to keep believing
    That your looks aren't deceiving

    No! I became you once, I remember
    All the limbs that I dismembered
    But all the blood that was spilled
    Didn't make my heart fulfilled

    So now I stand looking in the mirror
    Recalling the blood soaked horror
    The blade that took their lives
    Is the blade by which you will die

    I can't allow you to kill again
    But I know I can't keep you within
    So in order to kill you with this knife
    It seems that I must take my own life

    And now I plunge it deep
    I smile as blood begins to seep
    To comfort myself I just believe
    That two heartbeats just stopped

    simultaneously

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    I liked it =] it's somewhat different and slightly twisted, but I didn't like the ending much, it was as if it turned into another suicide poem =/.
    Good work.

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    Thank you! I actually got inspired to write it when I saw a documentary on this guy who had a split personality named Gemini that killed people. Crazy stuff.

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    two heart beat stops? hmmn... this is a nice poem... very imaginative...
    "When You have eliminated the IMPOSSIBLE, whatever remains, however IMPROBABLE, must be the TRUTH" -Detective Conan



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    Yeah, as in two personalities had two separate heart beats... it's kinda out there, I know.

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