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    Default Lone Samurai

    (Personally, I think my poem is stupid...)

    Lone Samurai

    Stagger through the brush,
    Dragging your feet across swollen earth,
    Trees of dew, tears of mornings gift falling downward,
    Do not mourn of loss,
    Instead shine,
    Never know what happens next,
    The battle has been lost,
    Blood strewn across the clearing,
    Clothes tattered and torn,
    Yet you still go on,
    Wounded to no end,
    Many already fled,
    Yet you remained,
    Battered and beaten, you became,
    Hold your sword tight,
    Before your life slips away,
    Don't give up,


    Lone Samurai
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    ur poem is not stupid it's interesting it actually just describes a samurai, which the difference is ur just rhyming, never really got poetry, i don't think deep into my soul and stuff, to pull out touchy feelly stuff.
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    It sorta comes naturally to me. Not sure why, but it just.. does I guess. ^^;

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