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    its pretty short but i hope you like it... ^^v

    ___________________________________________

    why are my feelings always snubbed by you
    i know you dont feel the same way
    but at least you could tell that to me
    straight to my face

    i will always be a friend to you
    ive known that from the start
    but deep down inside,
    youve always been in my heart

    yet i have to move on
    there's still more of this world i want to see
    i will find love, i will feel pain

    so my friend i ask of you
    just cheer on for me... :')
    Last edited by Fabala; 05-09-2008 at 02:11 AM.

    i loved you once...
    dont expect me to love you again...
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    *burrr* I had chills from the poem. (but in a good way) it just shows that the poem holds feelings. I LOVE SAD/LOVI DOVI OPEMS <3

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    It doesn't....really sound like a poem to be honest. I don't think it counts as one, does it? I admit I know squat about what makes poetry what it is but...am I the only one thinking this? o_O;;;


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    Elaborate, please. What doesn't sound like a poem about it? Realistically, there are numerous acceptable poem styles, one of which does include sentences continuing from line to line (was that the issue?).

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    Well if it is a poem then it is a bit pointless, it just seems to run around in circles and no go anywhere. First the narrator complains about how someone is snubbing her on, then she says she's gonna move on, but then she still gives a damn about the person. I also think it is mistitled, she never really lets go, does she? Just my opinion though...


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    what's wrong with it? i kinda like it...its as if she's confused...she loves the person but is still thinking if she'd really let go...at least thats what i think... ^^"

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