Did You Know?

[Assassin of Konoha]

Didn't you know?
Couldn't you see?
What it was you were doing to me?
Leading me on
Pulling me astray
Intoxicated be everything you'd say
Didn't you know?
Couldn't you see?
How deeply you had cut me?
Bleeding out
I tried to shout
Asking why
But no one heard my cry
Because you knew
And you didn't care
Why is true love so rare?
Alone as I cried
Healing? Yes, I tried
But my heart still hurts
From the scars you left me

[Ichiro Matsuchani]

Rather than poetry, that sounds as if it would make decent lyrics in a song. It had a pretty consistent rhythm and metering throughout the entire poem. Not bad, but not amazing or profound.

[Daenerys]

It actually really reminded me of a song I wrote when I was in 9th grade. I wasn't very fond of it, but I'm not sure if it was because it reminded me of it, or not.