Um..... stuff

[naotavespaboy]

close thread please

[Hamashimura]

*blasts in laugh* hahaha,not that good,eh...?
Roflic ^^
But seriously,these are quite good mate...
Your style is somewhat unique in it's own way,and that is quite appreciated...
Commander general one is pretty much great...
Lines of hair are well done,and facial shape is pretty good...
I love the face expresison,but I think that the expresison of big pain would suit better...
Eye is well done,but it might be better to lower it a bit,to have proportional dimensions with nose...
Mouth is well done,and distance from the nose is well placed..
I like the scar ^^
Neck to shoulder distance proportioning is quite good,tho left hand propotioning is not...too small distance from elbow to wrist,even for that dimensional look...
Hands are well done,and body proportions rock...
Outfit is very nice,I like your detailing...
Weapons struck in his body are all well done,especially the arrow...
Overall good,with some minor proportion problems...
As for word of advice - try using more shading ^_^

2nd picture is quite good too,I like the detailing of the map...
Soldiers are well done,and I like the dragon...very catchy ^^
Face expressions are well done,showing that they're having a battle,so that's good...
Again,detailing is amazing,I,for example would not have so much patience...
About magic part,it really lacks in shading,but the rest is perfectly fine...

Overall,don't think low upon your drawings...these are good,believe me,you trully have potential,so keep up...

[naotavespaboy]

Thanks Hama! You always do a good job reviewing peoples drawing. Thanks for the advice I really do need to practice at shading.......

[poison.ivy]

Overall,don't think low upon your drawings...these are good,believe me,you trully have potential,so keep up...

See?!?!!
And when I told you, you didn't believe me. Hopefully, you'll get it now when more people tells you the same thing ^.^ I like them, the 1st one is pretty cool. Just work on the shading, I agree with Hama. The 2nd one is very very interesting, I like it a lot. Don't you dare not to update!

[MissChelly]

I'm so glad you finally decided to post your awesome artwork! It'd be definitely fine by me for you to post the Mikayla picture I requested. It's too gorgeous to not share. I'm so glad you're drawing again, it'd be a waste of some wonderful talent if you didn't.

[Gero50]

I think they're good. I really don't know what else to say

[~*Red*~]

I really like all of the drawings, and that's about all I can say

[naotavespaboy]

Close thread please

[poison.ivy]

Wow! This is awesome! Naota, it's great! I love her body, it's beautiful. And the wings... Nothing less from you!

[Raharu]

Oh, these drawings are really cute, well cute to describe that third one. I wouldn't call the first two cute, I mean this is a good way. I like your drawings. ~

[MissChelly]

I envy your ability to draw wings... mine always look like odd cloud fluff...things... LOL I'm so glad you ended up posting that picture, it's not a fraction less than AWESOME.

[Hamashimura]

Uuuu,this is really,really good!!!!
Hair is like,too well done,and I'm in love with that face expression...
I really love the placement of bandages,looking great...scar is well done too...
Shoulder distance may be tad bit small,but that's not necessarily mistake...
Her breasts are well done,tho her body might be thinner than supposed to...
Other proportioning is good,I like it,especially the legs *daydreams*
Really good...
As usual,I like the detailing of your outfit,very good...
Shield is great,but I'm really amazed with the weapon...
It's just stunning...
Wings are pretty great too,I suck when it comes to wings...
Environment is great lol,I suck at drawing environment...
Heh,overall great,I really like it...
If I'd have to rate it,I would say 9.5/10 ...
Pretty great mate,keep up..

[naotavespaboy]

Ivy and Chelle the main reason why this thread exists is because of you Thank you for the support and restoring my confidence. I couldnt have done it without you.

Raharu - Thanks it looks like Mikayla has got a few fans now

Hama - thanks for the continued support too and the latest review glad you thought she was worth a 9.5!

Chelle - This drawing exists because you wanted it to. I spent extra time and attention on her for you. I'm happy that you think she's awesome.

[poison.ivy]

You're making me blush... I'm sure that it's Chelly's and mine pleasure to be your encouragement. You're a great artist! Don't ever forget it! And now go and draw something awesome.

[naotavespaboy]

sorry guys (especially Ivy, Chelle and Hama). I'll explain later why I've decided to close this.