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    Default Strange Forever

    I'm posing this inside HTML tags because it seems to be the only way to preserve my spacing and indents properly.

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    I've so many strange dreams
    Running 'round in my head,
    Read so many strange books
    That the story can't end.
    
    In the days, I pace the halls
           and search for the meaning of life.
    In the night, I lay awake
           and ponder the definition of reality.
    I stare at the stars and feel
           my entire being screaming for answers.
    
    Why do you stare at the stars so often?
           My questions have no answer.
    Why do you talk of such strange things?
           I've forgotten what I'm looking for.
    Why do you continue to seek all the answers?
           The seeking is called reality.
    
    Ten million dreams, recorded
    In ten million books, all labeled
    With a single title: Life.
    Ish hogtied, mostly, on a grill, oh, baby, covered in chocolate, mostly,
    with a banana in his mouth. Oh, oh, baby, if only Ai were that chick....

    ~AnimeGlobe, Old Skool - Society for the Creative Eating of the Ish~


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    This is very good! I loved it. Shouldn't answer be plural though? (Questions -> Answers)
    I definitly like the fact that I ask myself the same questions, and find myself without answers. The way you ended the poem was very well done; each life a story.
    Keep it up!
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    Min logikk kretser
    Blir skadet
    Ved en landeplage av følelser!
    Hva kan jeg gjøre?
    Alt jeg trodde jeg var ...
    Jeg er blitt mer.
    Mer menneske; et annet cog i maskinen av livet.
    Hvorfor kan jeg nyte dette?
    Jeg er så forvirret ...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Future_Defense View Post
    This is very good! I loved it. Shouldn't answer be plural though? (Questions -> Answers)
    Hm, honestly I never noticed that...what you say makes sense grammatically, but it still sounds fine either way to my ears. I think maybe it works for me because it sounds like all the questions come back to the same single answer, somehow.

    Thanks for the feedback, both of you.
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    with a banana in his mouth. Oh, oh, baby, if only Ai were that chick....

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