I need help again. I'm still somewhat unfamiliar with longer, complex sentences. I'd like to translate the two sentences in my signature.
"Music has the power to inspire people to change the world around them. I want to create a song which influences everyone in this way."
So far what I have is this;
音楽に人々をそれらのまわりで世界を変えるように促す力がある。僕は歌を作成したいと思うこうすればの皆に 影響を及ぼす。
Any corrections would be helpful. I know this kinda sounds wrong to me somehow.
共ありがとうご座居ました!
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