Lainskiss' Artwork Thread

[Lune Cy]

i hardly show me drawings to others...and some asked me to post a few....so here is the first...others will follow...i think ^^


this one is an old one...

http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/i...skiss/Hero.jpg

not sure if i posted this thread on the right place....

[vixen_wolf]

its not half bad. it could use some more shading tho, the face doesnt come toether as well with out it. the eye looks a bit off but again some shading will make it much better. keep up teh good work!!!

P.S its best to post it here on the thread

[Lune Cy]

im not good in drawing living things ^^...i prefer to draw 'backgrounds' ^^

[darkjester]

Well, it's pretty good actually.
I agree it does need shading to make it more realistic.
The hair bangs seem a little like ..they don't want to move at all - no motion.
Other then that, nice work so far. I like the little head piece robe/hood thing.
You should post more of your drawings!

[MissChelly]

I don't see why you don't tend to show your drawings- because this one's really good! If anything, you should show more of them! I really like it, I definitely envy your skills in realism. I agree with the shading tip- that would really just make the whole image look complete. Also, for the eyebrows- have you tried doing swift little lines instead to help emulate the eyebrow hairs on a real person? I think that would make it look even more realistic. Nonetheless, your drawing is extremely good and I hope you end up posting more of them in the near future.

[xXAltairXx]

The drawing is really good but as Vixen_Wolf mentioned is needs a little work. But overall it deserves 9 stars! X)

Keep It Up!

[UrusaiSevera]

 

GLARE

It needs more toning, shading, the nose and eyes need a bit of work, the hair could look a bit more breezy. Though the folding and shading on the scarf looks nice.

 

CONTINUES GLARING

[aerroW232]

Wow thats awsome!! ^^! Way better than I can do, but I would lighten the shade under her eyes and make more shade on her chin. But over all thats incredibly good!

[Lune Cy]

Here is another drawing....like the first one i posted its old....been over 3 years i drawn both of them...
for the comments about the shading on me drawings...i know ^^
i do suck at it ^^...i cant draw humans/animals..so no 'chance' ill end up shading them ^^

the next drawing will be a more recent one a drawn..till then ..heres an old one ^^ i have no title for this drawing though...


http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/i...nskiss/Jiv.jpg

PS: the girls left eye is totally messed up ^^

[Arcxcia]

It's a good drawing. I like it!

[DarkMoonPrince]

It looks pretty good, I know you like to do backgrounds more but a little more shading would be good.

[Lune Cy]

Well this is a more recent drawing...im not sure if there is any improvement visible compared with the other 2 drawings i posted..

[Cheza-WolfGirl]

Hey awesome drawing! the clothes are very well done ^^

[Tira Misu]

Hi there! As you can tell I've merged all three of the threads you started. If you review the Fanart Forum rules you'll see you are only allowed one thread to post all of your artwork in. So please from now on post all new pieces of work in THIS thread only.

Thank you!

[Lune Cy]

Okey..thanks you for the reminder ^^...ill just post on here the rest of my drawings...

[BuLmA]

For your first post:
This drawing is not animation....it looks like you draw a model..anyway..it's nice but there's a lil problem in her eyes Lain...she has big eye bugs! lol unless the model really is=P anyway...it's pretty well done!...artist!xD

For your second Post:
Hmmm...You messed up with the guy's nose Lain!lol (what a judge!) it seems that the girl in your first draw and this girl are the same person is she? .Keep practicing Lain!

For your third post:
Now this is a perfect one! yes..it has improvement now..he has a nice jacket by the way! o.O Good job!

[sataned]

awsome drawings...
did you have people pose for these?

[Lune Cy]

Nobody posed for my drawings...lol..xD

[╬Karami Mew~Meow]

Pretty realistic, and nice ^^
Kewl, I wanna see one of your backgrounds ^.^

[Hamashimura]

Ummm...Lain...I'll have to admit,you have the talent...
Only thing remained is to develop it...
Seriously,these are very good...

im not good in drawing living things ^^...i prefer to draw 'backgrounds' ^^

Hah,don't make me laugh *laughs*
You? Not good at living things? LOL!!!
Sure,they aren't the best,but with some practice you could create an actual,normal looking human being...

First picture seemed very nice,though face is a bit bit awkward...I think it's because I find eyes too small...
I like the shape of the face tho,not many people do actual human beings...
So,that has pretty much big unfluence on me...
As I've said,eyes are kinda the problem...
I like the shape of the nose,it's so realistic,and her lips are pretty much well done,though I think that the down part of the lip should be a bit thinner,because that kind of lips kinda doesn't go wel with the face...
Other than that is great...

Second picture is waaay more better...
I love the idea,and I'm definitelly amazed by the proportioning o.O
Really good,though there's some quite big difference in lenght of his hands...Namely,the hand on his knee is way smaller than the girl hugging the girl...no matter from where or how do I look at it,just seem small...
Guys face is well done,with quite reallistic epression...
Hands and fingers are great,I like those lil shades on fingers that are making it look good...
Outfit is good,I just love the way you placed shadows on them,with a little more shadows they would look like real,believe me...
Since you've noticed about girls eye,I'll skip that...
The girls face is good too,and body proportions are almost perfect...
I really love the way she looks,and her face expression..
Lips on this one are very well done,but her outfit needs more shadows...
Pretty much if I had to rate it,you would get 9/10...
Drawing itself is really good,and it would be pure 10 if you've placed more shadows to make it realistic...

3rd one is probably the best...
Nice colorish effect,and definitely great proportioning...
His face is well done,especially eyes,nose and lips...
Perfect!
Ah,I see more shadows than on others,very nice...
You see how shadows are making it looking even better?
SO yeah,outfit is great,but hat needs shadows now...

Oh well,that's it from me ^_^
A word of advice - when it comes to drawing,shading is your best friend...
You have a talent that deserves to be improved...

[Lune Cy]

Oh well,that's it from me ^_^
A word of advice - when it comes to drawing,shading is your best friend...
You have a talent that deserves to be improved...

Thanks Thanks ..xD...means a lot to me...i must say i feel inspired to make more 'human' drawings..even i'm quite busy at my office..there was a drawing i was working on 2 months ago..the next drawing to be posted will be that one..i think ^_^..i hope ^_^

[Love Lawliet]

Those drawings are so nice! I wish I could draw something other that girls...its about the only thing i can draw...does that mean im not creative?
Lainy! Your a VERY good artist!

[Mira Kaiba]

Very nice work, especially the last drawing. The first one is not bad - it's better than I can do with an actual model. It does need shading and depth, as does the girl in the second one. The man in the second drawing was much better, and the shading was good on him. The third one is the best - it's really good! It's maybe a little smudged and messy from the pencil work, but the form and shading are much better, and I like the rays in the background. The text is cool too. Keep up the awesome drawing! XD