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    Default The Scream

    I open my mouth and scream out loud
    Screaming at the top of my lungs
    It fills the air and echoís in my head
    I can hear nothing else only my screams
    Tears stream down my face
    They pour like a busted dam
    I clench my fist and continue to scream
    My soul is smothered with pain
    My eyes are blinded by rage
    I tremble like a leaf in the breeze
    My known world is done
    Shattered and destroyed
    All I can do is scream
    If I stop I know Iíll fall faster
    Into the darkness and pain
    My heart is bleeding being strangled by so much
    Both my parents done lives wasted by another
    One person stupid choice has taken them away
    I smash and break thing unable to stop
    I just canít take it right now
    Something inside snaps and I scream louder
    I scream until the scream turn into sobs
    Until my voice goes hoarse
    I collapse and my body trembles
    Flooded and over flowing with pain
    Now I cry until I have passed out
    Into a deep and troubled sleep

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    Please try not to post in font colors in fanfiction/poetry. It makes it impossible to read on different forum themes.
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    Other than color, i think it's pretty good, shows some emotion in it, keep up the good work.

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    I like this poem...it's sad but it shows so much emotion. I can learn from you...^.^

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