Walking in the rain

[-Blackfire-]

A dark road
in the rain
will the light..
save the pain?

I can't sleep
And you're my waking thought
Do you know you've made me lose everything
everything that mattered?

Walking in the rain,
i still feel the pain
but will it cleanse the sin
So my repentance can begin?

You're dwelling in my blood
A sickness that can't be cured
When will my feelings flood,
take over yours?

It's dark now
The light has gone
The rain is heavy
Still singing my song

Am i in your thoughts
like you're in mine?
Will i forget you?
Do i just need time?

Tears fall for you
and you don't care
Pity me?
Don't you dare.

You've cast a spell
not just on me
It's a curse
on us three.

The rain is falling
Will it stop?
Darkness is here
Will light ever come?

[remi]

It is once again raw feeling, which is your style. It has a pleasant rhythm to it, and the short lines, in a way, remind me of rain itself. At the same time, the choice of words does give it a dark, sombre feel, which fits with the topic.

[Lune Cy]

You've cast a spell
not just on me
It's a curse
on us three.


i love that part ^^...nice poem..^^