Mine is the eyes hat glint in the night
trapped in a cage searching for light
Mine is roar that calls for fear
when your to close mine is the ear
Mine is the tail not shore what to do
mine is the tail trying to do something new
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It has a very good rhyme to it, but try to make it longer! Also, spellcheck on words such as 'that' and 'you're'. Did you capitalise every other line on purpose?
Also, one more question, when you say 'tail' do you mean a tail or tale (like a story)?
Keep up the good work!
Mine are the eyes that glint in the night
trapped in a cage searching for light
Mine is the roar that calls for fear
when you're too close mine is the ear
Mine is the tail not sure what to do
mine is the tail trying to do something new
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