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    Mine is the eyes hat glint in the night
    trapped in a cage searching for light
    Mine is roar that calls for fear
    when your to close mine is the ear
    Mine is the tail not shore what to do
    mine is the tail trying to do something new
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    It has a very good rhyme to it, but try to make it longer! Also, spellcheck on words such as 'that' and 'you're'. Did you capitalise every other line on purpose?
    Also, one more question, when you say 'tail' do you mean a tail or tale (like a story)?
    Keep up the good work!

    Mine are the eyes that glint in the night
    trapped in a cage searching for light
    Mine is the roar that calls for fear
    when you're too close mine is the ear
    Mine is the tail not sure what to do
    mine is the tail trying to do something new
    Nøytral
    følelsesløs
    Min logikk kretser
    Blir skadet
    Ved en landeplage av følelser!
    Hva kan jeg gjøre?
    Alt jeg trodde jeg var ...
    Jeg er blitt mer.
    Mer menneske; et annet cog i maskinen av livet.
    Hvorfor kan jeg nyte dette?
    Jeg er så forvirret ...

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