death is nothing to fear

[luz~]

sitting here thinking how did i end up this way
crying all alone
yes thats me
a girl with friends but no lover
a girl that has no one to understand
but everyone to comfort

plz post im bored here
(\_/)
(0.0)
(> <)
fear da bunny

[kisses2]

Small,but nice. Good job.

[Future_Defense]

Short and compact, but I wish it was longer

Perhaps adding a few more lines about why you're alone etc?

It's a good beginning!