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    Been packing and sifting through my old stuff since I'm about to move back into my house, which has finally been rebuilt. I don't remember when I wrote this but it must have been a good 10 years ago and reading it reminds me of the child that was in me. I hope you all enjoy this one, if not then my apologies and remind me to never post in the poetry forum again. Here goes

    ~ I Was An Animal ~

    I was a bird, flying free
    Atop silky white clouds
    Amidst the evergreen trees
    Whistling for joy, happy to be free

    I was a horse, strong and wild
    With no worries on my mind
    Dancing in the wind
    Running around, being unbound

    I was a fox, cunning and sly
    Saving myself with foul lies
    Hiding from minor troubles
    Made from minor mistakes

    I was a child, Most of all
    Innocent and true
    Where things were all so simple
    Where white was white, And blue was blue

    ~ END ~

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    Interesting...from the title, I was expecting something about rage and tearing people to bits and other barbaric things. But instead, it's wild and beautiful and peaceful...nostalgic in a good way.

    Hope you'll be posting more. Don't let replies (or lack thereof) determine what you do. If you want to write, write!
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    Nice.
    I like how pretty and peaceful it is.Its a nice poem and I think you have the potential to write a whole lot more greater ones.

    Keep it up!^^
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    I was Hieko.

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    Thanks for the encouragement and I'm really touched by it... and yes, compared to the stuff I right now I guess this one could've painted a flesh ripping, blood dripping grotesque scene.... its weird how you write stuff from ages ago and compare the person you were then with the person you are now... I remember writing it and why I wrote it.... but I look at that me as if its another person... its a strange feeling but nice at the same time... so thanks again and I will post another one when the inspiration bells start jinggling again....

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